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2023-09-21 23:43

The mc is like a Chinese novel protagonist. HE IS THE BEST AND EVERYONE IS NOTHING...!.

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Not to bad a novel, the concept of simulations has been used before but I fear it will limit the story growth overall. The characters are, in my opinion, just very 2 dimensional. Your either good or bad, there is no middle ground. The MC is low key in the beginning, then gets a bit of power and then goes full on nuclear. His attitude to others is merciless, their values are determined by their usefulness to him as tools. He professes his devotion to his loved ones yet i feel it is one of the many masks he wears. Oh and he is a yandere which is introduced early on. I think the book is interesting but so far to me, it just feels like a wish fulfilment novel that the author can let loose with his dark thoughts. I read up to the current chapter before privlage locks, think about chapter 41 odd, and don’t believe this one is for me as I don’t believe a book focussed solely on world simulations has a great life expectancy. If he was a bit more invested with the real world then maybe, but in the 40 odd chapters, he has only stepped outside his house once and even then, with his powers he couldnt be bothered to save a girl who was fighting to save others, knowing she was insufficient for the task. He just turned away and left the scene, that really was the final nail. Many ways the author could have turned this narrative around, such as disguised himself and intervened to test his new powers etc, but no, he just couldn’t be bothered and coldly dismissed her. Anyways Tl;dr. Just a dark book with little redeeming qualities at this stage of development.

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