I honestly liked the idea of the story, but there are SO MUCH side character interactions that after 30 chapters I was sick of it. I wanted to give this 5 stars, but there are several things I didn't like even though I enjoyed reading the first half of the fanfic, a conscious system, I really hate them, they're like having a person standing in the middle of the movie screen while commenting out loud about the movie, it's really disgusting and annoying, Besides, the system is a loli, which is even worse, a Loli is literally a little-year-old girl, which is terribly illegal. The previous point bothered me a lot but there were also other things, for example the terribly slow pace and the forced plots, accompanied by the MC breaking the 4th wall to justify that the author is forcing the plot (when he fought the 2 beastmen, it was terribly obvious)I really don't know if it improves later but honestly I don't have the desire or strength to continue reading this. Giving the MC convenient abilities is also forced plot, just wanted to mention it
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Ayooo loli system?
Yeah, there are explicit descriptions of the Loli, honestly a Loli should be an adorable creature that is pleasant to caress, like a pet (I'm talking about the moe) but when they use a Loli in a way... you know what I mean, it's disgusting
I agree with you on how annoying a conscious system can be especially if it isn't helpful to the host. It actually feels like Im' reading a chinese fanfic with how similar they are with story progression and on how the MC acts
Obviously, they are underage children, they have nothing attractive and only sick people find pleasure in a Loli
Bro is roasting children with no fire 💀
haha im just kidding dude dont take the gif too literal.
there are also constant pov changes with no warning, misgendering and tons of typos in general.
