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Why did the starship break up with the comet? It needed space!
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I suspect Magnus's suicide may have somehow played a role in the alteration of Van's passive skill, 'Untrusted'.
ChatGPT FTW.
I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.
This fanfic blew me away! It's hands down one of the best I've ever read on this site. Young Kenshin's interactions had me cracking up non-stop during the first two arcs. All in all, it's just an amazing story. Mad props to the author - you killed it! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for arc three. Bring it on!
So, I went into this Tonikaku Kawaii fanfic totally blind, with no clue about the anime. Zero expectations. I've only read the first 20 chapters, but here's the deal: the premise felt pretty cliche, and honestly, it was a bit of a letdown. Kinda reminds me of a typical Chinese fanfic. The interactions between the main guy and girl made me cringe a bit - feels like it was written by a teenage girl, lol. The chat group system was a nice touch, but there hasn't been much focus on that in these early chapters. Plus, the main character is already super OP from the get-go, so I'm not sure where the story's headed. Look, it's not really my thing, but hey, props to the author for putting their first fanfic out there on this platform. Best of luck to 'em!
Haha đ ! Just spotted your growing Patreon subscriber base - congrats, you totally deserve it! Keep up the amazing work. đ
Totally cool with you having a Patreon, but just wondering, does your dad know what the MC pulled on his own dad? đđ
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I honestly feel like I might not be getting the full genius of this story. It began on a high note but quickly became a bit messy, unpolished, and repetitive, just like another review mentioned. Even after 20 chapters, I'm struggling to catch on to the main hook or setup of the plot; it seems a bit scattered to me.