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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv11yr
2023-07-13 02:30

I found the novel good. The absence of a harem gives this novel a big plus. because in la et danmachi every non-male character falls in love with mc. but i have one disappointment. this mc's bell. I wish it was someone else instead of Bell. I don't like Bell, but I'd like it if he looked a little bit of a man with a good adult by his side.

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Zenon00125
Zenon00125Lv2

who is the heroine?

DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv11

the hate on bell is wild

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13

bell is mc instead of oc? thx for the warning

Rehman_Muneeb
Rehman_MuneebLv4

what does it mean what is Oz

Damian0481:bell is mc instead of oc? thx for the warning
BurritoThereAlone
BurritoThereAloneLv2

its' OC, it means original character, it's a character that was inserted into the story by the fanfic author that wasn't in the original story

Rehman_Muneeb:what does it mean what is Oz
Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5

no harem welp this is trash

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13

OC is original character, a made up one by the author, normally in fanfics the oc is the mc, instead of the actual mc like bell

Rehman_Muneeb:what does it mean what is Oz
Dash6217
Dash6217Lv14

He is generic and boring with a plain design and focuses on Japanese having a little boy complex as an MC because they are 'cute' and 'innocent'.

DarkCreation101:the hate on bell is wild
The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Bells a wimpy loser that simps over every woman he comes across in the illusion of being nice

DarkCreation101:the hate on bell is wild
Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

absence of a harem bro there's not even any romance let alone a harem

Akashic_Avatar
Akashic_AvatarLv4

He’s 14…he is a little boy but he grows and develops. I personally really like his character and design.

Dash6217:He is generic and boring with a plain design and focuses on Japanese having a little boy complex as an MC because they are 'cute' and 'innocent'.
Akashic_Avatar
Akashic_AvatarLv4

I can tell you clearly haven’t read the light novels. Bell matures and isn’t as cowardly anymore, he only ever simped for ais but later on it really tones down. He gets a lot better later on. Hope this sheds a more positive light of his character development for you.

The_reader_ofnovel:Bells a wimpy loser that simps over every woman he comes across in the illusion of being nice
Akashic_Avatar
Akashic_AvatarLv4

Absolutely, these edgy alpha/sigma wannabe’s are acting like his character pulled a Griffith to Guts moment on their family and friends, while all they could do was helplessly watch.

DarkCreation101:the hate on bell is wild
DarkCreation101
DarkCreation101Lv11

Spitting facts smh. Bells character was made the way it was, because he was young and innocent. He had a devoted mindset, and although he was a simp, it helped him a lot more than other simpish characters...

Akashic_Avatar:Absolutely, these edgy alpha/sigma wannabe’s are acting like his character pulled a Griffith to Guts moment on their family and friends, while all they could do was helplessly watch.
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Nevarus
NevarusLv5

I wouldn't say because of that, but a danmachi fanfic without harem is one thing.... specifically having a no-harem tag takes my expectations for quality, shoots them in the head, and buries them out in the backyard.

Helios_Sol:no harem welp this is trash
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