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shahad_khan
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2024-05-11 11:31

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEW CHAPTERS WHEN WILL IT COME??????????? HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Danmachi: The Black Hole

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3.9
44 Chs

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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I found the novel good. The absence of a harem gives this novel a big plus. because in la et danmachi every non-male character falls in love with mc. but i have one disappointment. this mc's bell. I wish it was someone else instead of Bell. I don't like Bell, but I'd like it if he looked a little bit of a man with a good adult by his side.

1yr

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

The protagonist is annoying. There are characters who do not have emotions and also those who do not have social skills and there is the protagonist of the soap opera who has emotions, has social skills but does not use them.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

12mth
TheSentience
TheSentienceLv14

I think the story is good and has a lot of potential for growth but as of right now one thing I find slightly disappointing is that The MC is needlessly dark I get there is a reason, but it just feels forced and an excuse to right a dark protagonist.

1yr
DaoistElxnbZ
DaoistElxnbZLv1

So I read your story MHA and wanted to know if you are going to release chapters again?....................................................................................... ....

11mth
batuhan
batuhanLv1

This is good. Writing is nice and fun to read. Story itself is intriguing. I don’t need to know mc’s background or any irrelevant history of his. His actions speaks louder. But having a stonefaced, uninterested by anything vibe of mc becoming boring. If he doesn’t have fun, scare, rage or yearn for anything, why should we read it?

1yr
AbE2006
AbE2006Lv1

This story would have been really popular if the author worked a bit on the story development the world background and the character design. I mean this story is so rushed that it feels quite forced tbh

7mth
Kloud_Paradizo
Kloud_ParadizoLv14

MC kept being more and more edgy in later chapters to the point of repetitive and boring.

9mth
Rafael_Suassuna
Rafael_SuassunaLv1

I want more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

11mth
Aster_ainosDaoist
Aster_ainosDaoistLv13

a very good, well-constructed fanfic with interesting characters and an encouraging start, a relatively well-explained and detailed world as well as the interactions between the characters. Frequent updates and weekly content provided and maintained. I would like more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more reviews to increase its visibility. If I have to make one criticism it is the appearance of the mc which is not introduced in a clear manner and without context but that can be introduced later if it is a voluntary act of the author

11mth
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