DarkCreation101

I liked this... Very much, you get my support!

Where is cjapter 1 through 77? its like you forgot they exist

I don't mean to diss, but I can't even give a proper review because I can't read the first chapter. It's the same for another book you have.

blood is said to have a copper like taste

I agree, but... Idk, just felt too simple. Like no one questioned why he came out with blood on his lips. Not saying they had to, and not even sure if what I'm saying is what I'm trying to convey...

I'm not against it, honestly, just wish there had been a little more build-up to this. Like, what is it like in the dungeon as someone with no fauna, or how he got out without say... Anyone saying anything?

Confused on how, they come from the same clan, but not the same family, and not every Uzumaki is necessarily related in that sense.

one*

why maki, we already have ond

btw i want to apologize now, I'm not in the right mood... Seeing this just pissed me off because of how relatable it is..