Item: Danmachi: The Black Hole
Rating: 1.4
Author: Kloud_Paradizo

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2024-07-06 18:47

MC kept being more and more edgy in later chapters to the point of repetitive and boring.

Danmachi: The Black Hole

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3.9

44 Chs

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