Little_El

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He is not a neutral evil, he's just a psychopath , her beef with Eddard Stark is so cringeworthy , he himself said that the wolf's forest is the size of a small country in Europe. so there's no way Stark could cross it on horseback just for a boy , he is stupid and arrogant , he didn't need to show his contempt for the lords to the villager with all that arrogance , his little war is useless and has no meaning, it only slowed down his learning and stagnated , frankly it's quite stupid and spoils the story , The beginning of the story was really great, I was really looking forward to seeing him hunting all over Planetos , even go beyond the wall in search of mammoth , unfortunately he is a psychopath who ruined everything

Random Gender *sigh * stopped here

Mary Sue SI or all the characters are adapted to his desired life

It's the story of an adult infiltrated (in a child's body) grooming a child named Tsunade

Good start, the first 15 chapters are good but you can see that the quality declines slightly as the chapters go on , it's a real struggle to read these interactions with Tenten, these uncomfortable, like those old people from the village who complimented you when I was little , he's an adult in a child's body, he shouldn't have noticed Tenten's beauty like that , see him flirting with her, God, just ewww. I hope the author fixes this , it's really important , the fact that the only description when he notices someone female is that she's pretty is pretty weird , the last chapter is discouraging, the fact that he took a mission without the consent of the Village pourrait consister à une trahison, c'est strict military government, il n'est que de la chair à canon , he is quite idiotic and thoughtless . I'm afraid that this story will end up becoming like the other story with Shikamaru SI, I have not been able to read more than 5 chapters of each other, please author don't spoil this story. If the interactions with Tenten or more precisely the main characters improve, I will return with 5 stars

He is disappointed ?Why would he need to defeat Madara?I hate these MCs who suddenly think they're the protagonist, just survived 🙄

the idea behind the story is good but there are too many bad things that make this story unreadable, The MC's father is Asian and has an Asian last name, for no reason his father calls him Clark Kent, making the MC a foreigner in his own country, the conversations are forced, awkward

Good start but I stopped at chapter 17, it got shitty, I saw this story after reading the story it was inspired by, and I was quite excited thinking that he wasn't going to make the same mistake as the other one which I had to give up on much sooner but hey, almost the same errors. the relationship with his sisters is much more realistic than the other story but not much, her twin only has two emotions, cries, and screams, and his little sister is annoying, I know 13-year-olds who are more disciplined and respectful, and it shows that she was not well educated and that the author does not know a normal sibling relationship, the author was rather inspired by cliché Chinese relationships, too early to have a girlfriend, barely meet and he's losing his mind and she's in love, quite squeaky, I had to skip the hats where he interacts with anyone, everything is forced and creaky, the authors forget what we are looking for in this type of story is to watch the MC have money and be intelligent about the provenance of the sources. he is already suspected by his twin, of working online and staying outside the house. show that you have a new job, not this kind of mysterious phrase and promises that now everything is fine, very suspicious, in short, this story has a future but deserves a rewrite