as of ch 27 overall I'll say the story isnt bad it's no I'll I'm watching it so I can read as soon as it updates but if your just looking for something to read that isnt completely brain dead it can fill in writing quality 2.5: it is decentish some parts come off weird or just bland but its readable and isnt atrocious story development 3.5: overall its laid out its direction and has progressed along the overall plotline without dragging it out or becoming convoluted character design 2: honestly the mc isnt bad but he just feels lacking in alot of ways he has alot of domains cant remember but think 100 was mentioned most not named but in almost every way he doesnt seem like it until he pulls out I sliced you in half and you dont even realize your dead already or everything I cook is delicious yet he apparently forgot pretty much his life before (pretty sure gods would have some sort of memory retention) not to mention I'm sure he has some type of scholar domain and all the skills and information needed to be a god yet some I forget but 25 years ? of memories were to much? overall he seems more like an average virgin who had "tiger"parents controlling his life and just stepped into adulthood with all the naivety insecurity ect and such when at least some of his domains should help at minimum mitigate it I'm not asking for gigachad or anything but something more then shown update stability 4: cant really comment since I'm not actively watching it but it seems to be updated fairly regularly at the moment world development 3: only because there really hasn't been a true need so far for any world development besides the first world and it was mostly a transition setup world and the gist of it was covered overall like I said if your just looking for a filler that isnt completely braindead it's a decent option
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Over_The_Moon69:4th, cause webnovel shadowbanned NY commentimage
When you say something so dumb like "in the heart, he is still average guy" - you already lost.This is bs.If he was, he wouldn't survive. The end.
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sure whatever, you cant see the whole point and just pick up a single line out of context, good going, the Mc was average when he went to that world but worked hard and whatever means aside from sexual favours to get stronger, just because he was average at first doesn't mean he wouldn't be able to survive, he had the support of the kingdom and the church which he left only after he was sure that he could carry on his own, why is it so hard for you to understand that his memory started to fail him when was working on the scholar skill where he was nearly 300, even if the world has mana he already lived thrice as long as normal humans from that world, I am pretty sure you still don't get the point so won't waste any more of my time on this
Yuri_is_Ntr:When you say something so dumb like "in the heart, he is still average guy" - you already lost.This is bs.If he was, he wouldn't survive. The end.
I don't care about his memories. I care that he is pathetic average Joe.
Over_The_Moon69:sure whatever, you cant see the whole point and just pick up a single line out of context, good going, the Mc was average when he went to that world but worked hard and whatever means aside from sexual favours to get stronger, just because he was average at first doesn't mean he wouldn't be able to survive, he had the support of the kingdom and the church which he left only after he was sure that he could carry on his own, why is it so hard for you to understand that his memory started to fail him when was working on the scholar skill where he was nearly 300, even if the world has mana he already lived thrice as long as normal humans from that world, I am pretty sure you still don't get the point so won't waste any more of my time on this
I'd you want genius and perfect mcs go somewhere else, you'll find many of such stories on webnovel, and why talk on a topic you aren't even interested in?
Yuri_is_Ntr:I don't care about his memories. I care that he is pathetic average Joe.
I did actually read the story fully my main issue isnt that he was some average human but that hes some god of over 100 domains with all the powers skills instincts and everything to go along with it yet hes like you said an average human except when hes suddenly needing to have god like skills also current belief and research is you dont actually loose memories they just get moved or underuse leads to your brain not remembering where the memory is in layman's terms pretty sure if hes a god and got all that brain power he wouldnt have that issue like I said the issue isnt that hes some average human he isnt anymore hasn't been for some 8000 years and nothing in your writing has given a believable reason why hes still acting like an average human everyone of his domains would have an impact on him if he had to learn and pretty much ingrained each domain like you made it sound they would be a part of him fully and you cant say he didn't fully embrace and ingrained them cause as he learned more and more the time he took for each one speed up as he grew not some blind deaf mute mentally slow character your having him portrayed as cause it's like saying hes at power level 10000 yet is functionally operating on 10 except in spurts to kill and make things overall it boils down to you havent given me a believable reason why I should suspend belief that your mc isnt purposely unbelievably pathetic 8000 years without a woman doesnt equate to 8000years if ingrained skills knowledge and instincts that you lived and breathed he would reasonably have to be fighting against every bit of godhood he has to equate to how your mc acts around women ie average human (which he isnt)
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Nice job! Completely owned him by pointing out all his plotholes to the point where he didn’t even reply.
DarkestCalling:I did actually read the story fully my main issue isnt that he was some average human but that hes some god of over 100 domains with all the powers skills instincts and everything to go along with it yet hes like you said an average human except when hes suddenly needing to have god like skills also current belief and research is you dont actually loose memories they just get moved or underuse leads to your brain not remembering where the memory is in layman's terms pretty sure if hes a god and got all that brain power he wouldnt have that issue like I said the issue isnt that hes some average human he isnt anymore hasn't been for some 8000 years and nothing in your writing has given a believable reason why hes still acting like an average human everyone of his domains would have an impact on him if he had to learn and pretty much ingrained each domain like you made it sound they would be a part of him fully and you cant say he didn't fully embrace and ingrained them cause as he learned more and more the time he took for each one speed up as he grew not some blind deaf mute mentally slow character your having him portrayed as cause it's like saying hes at power level 10000 yet is functionally operating on 10 except in spurts to kill and make things overall it boils down to you havent given me a believable reason why I should suspend belief that your mc isnt purposely unbelievably pathetic 8000 years without a woman doesnt equate to 8000years if ingrained skills knowledge and instincts that you lived and breathed he would reasonably have to be fighting against every bit of godhood he has to equate to how your mc acts around women ie average human (which he isnt)
you have pointing out a lot of stuff, things that I didn't think people would look for, I commend you on that, and I will give you proper reason as to why the Mc is acting like that in the fic, why he lost most of his memories, why does he act like that around women, and how did he exactly go around losing his memories, he isn't an average man now for sure like you said, which is why it is weird to see him act like that, like you pointed out it is like he has a switch in him that is flipped suddenly when he has to fight, I will explain this but in the future chapters, you'll get your answers if you are still reading by then, thank you reading till now though, I appreciate your enthusiasm.
DarkestCalling:I did actually read the story fully my main issue isnt that he was some average human but that hes some god of over 100 domains with all the powers skills instincts and everything to go along with it yet hes like you said an average human except when hes suddenly needing to have god like skills also current belief and research is you dont actually loose memories they just get moved or underuse leads to your brain not remembering where the memory is in layman's terms pretty sure if hes a god and got all that brain power he wouldnt have that issue like I said the issue isnt that hes some average human he isnt anymore hasn't been for some 8000 years and nothing in your writing has given a believable reason why hes still acting like an average human everyone of his domains would have an impact on him if he had to learn and pretty much ingrained each domain like you made it sound they would be a part of him fully and you cant say he didn't fully embrace and ingrained them cause as he learned more and more the time he took for each one speed up as he grew not some blind deaf mute mentally slow character your having him portrayed as cause it's like saying hes at power level 10000 yet is functionally operating on 10 except in spurts to kill and make things overall it boils down to you havent given me a believable reason why I should suspend belief that your mc isnt purposely unbelievably pathetic 8000 years without a woman doesnt equate to 8000years if ingrained skills knowledge and instincts that you lived and breathed he would reasonably have to be fighting against every bit of godhood he has to equate to how your mc acts around women ie average human (which he isnt)
you know it isn't that I ignored him but the fact that with each update it feels like webnovel is getting worse, I seriously miss a lot of comments and replies because they don't even show up in the inbox, his reply was one of them and I happened to just find it while checking the reviews since there was a notification for a review but there was no review made, you see how bad things are?
Hahadavis:Nice job! Completely owned him by pointing out all his plotholes to the point where he didn’t even reply.
Honestly I haven’t read your story I was just basing my opinion on you not responding to his issues/criticism but seeing that you actually responded and didn’t take offense to his comments made me want to read it and form an opinion on it myself.
Over_The_Moon69:you know it isn't that I ignored him but the fact that with each update it feels like webnovel is getting worse, I seriously miss a lot of comments and replies because they don't even show up in the inbox, his reply was one of them and I happened to just find it while checking the reviews since there was a notification for a review but there was no review made, you see how bad things are?
hey author, I may be late but you can read Mister Immortal's novels and fics for learning how to write in better quality.
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G1LGAMESH:hey author, I may be late but you can read Mister Immortal's novels and fics for learning how to write in better quality.
? I don't understand.
Over_The_Moon69:image
no nothing...
G1LGAMESH:? I don't understand.
bro really wanted his mc to be japanese
Over_The_Moon69:I'd you want genius and perfect mcs go somewhere else, you'll find many of such stories on webnovel, and why talk on a topic you aren't even interested in?
