mc is so cowardly that it makes the story unbearable. At least we had lemons before now we don't even get lemons, so reading this fiction became more of a chore
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once again this guessing game. give me the points that you don't like. like pick the places where he was cowardly man. I need to understand more of your point instead of scratching my head cause you didn't give me anything to understand from.
whole one piece arc? whole jjk arc? every conversations with girls/goddess? is this enough? you could read paragraph comments to see what people thinks
oh right, can't forget tsunade part. that was just horrendous.
Well, if you can't handle that part then what can I say. you should know that it showed what the shop should've been like. The mc was just lucky to meet people who went along with it. and it was an important moment. you have once again just said, oh it was horrendous. like what was? what did you not understand in my comment?
no-no, I don't talk about that he forced, that you beach about. It's a situation as whole and how mc being a whuby little baby about it. He already knew how all this works, don't like it ,don't help tsunade. But you just want have a thousands years old being a beach, right?
I see that words are wasted on you. to read so many chapters and still miss the main point about the mc, smh. if you don't want the see the good parts of the story, then I guess there is nothing I can do.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, oh wait you are serious? No-no, I understand that you delusional and ret#rded. Everytime you speak with someone else on comments section, was a pleasure too see. But how long will you delude yourself. This future character growth, wasn't worth it from the start. It's already a cheap, dumb and unoriginal idea. Just as this novel as whole. I mean who I am to stop you from living in you closet world, but if you are not a 15. Get to you family and ask for a psychiatrist help, you need it. In a good case scenario, you are just autistic, in a bad ret#rded, but not as slur...
The good parts of the story is clouded by the beta Mc you made, atleast make it seem he isn't a pathetic Beta Mc. The thing is we mostly focus on Mc, and if he is the one who sucks then those good points are as side garbage
that the is problem no? throughout the chapters you focus on the mc yet you fail to learn about him or what causes his problems because of the views you have which makes him a beta or pathetic, you basically saw him as a character who you don't even want to know about. I would say his patheticness as you call it did fuel that, but it is almost like the years of solitude and piled up trauma changed him on a deeper level. though I'd say that the most important issue was the failure of my implementation. I fell short of what I had in mind, it might be the personal understanding and attachment to the character as a writer that must've made me feel that his actions were proper. but to readers who do not have any attachment or see him as pathetic that sort of understanding will not come, in fact even the good moments will be seen as annoying because of the opinion they formed. like you said the good parts get clouded by the problems with the mc. and they do get solved but if you don't like the story there is no need to force through it and leave sour comments without trying to understand what is happening.
