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TheAngels
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2023-08-28 15:09

Before the Tsunade arc the only bad thing about the fanfic was the mc, after the tsunade arc it's just meaningless drama and the mc got worse from 0 to -100, there are pathetic protagonists and then this one.

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Over_The_Moon69
Over_The_Moon69Author

I see, so you don't like that is Mc was being responsible for his actions? and then you guys complain about how the Mc doesn't feel human or is a cardboard cutout.like the reason the tsunade arc hit that much for the Mc was explained a total of 5 times but you just didn't get it did you?

TheAngels
TheAngelsLv2

Hello Author, the problem is precisely that, we do not understand how the mc after living so many thousands of years and becoming a god acts like this, not only with Tsunade but with all the other girls, so far you have only shown us a clueless and silly mc and no matter how many times you explain the morality of the mc, this all feels like a plot where you want the mc to have a development, but done very, very badly, plus it's not just me, after Tsunade's arc the criticism started, true?

Over_The_Moon69:I see, so you don't like that is Mc was being responsible for his actions? and then you guys complain about how the Mc doesn't feel human or is a cardboard cutout.like the reason the tsunade arc hit that much for the Mc was explained a total of 5 times but you just didn't get it did you?
TheAngels
TheAngelsLv2

Your story is good, the mc was bearable so there were good reviews focused on the characters and the story ignoring the mc, you talk about not wanting cardboard mc, but ironically your mc is the only character in your story that feels cardboard, as I said your story is good and the characters besides the mc are good but the mc and the plot of Tsunade was the trigger and you should To know, reviews are made to know what is wrong, not just to put 5*.

Over_The_Moon69:I see, so you don't like that is Mc was being responsible for his actions? and then you guys complain about how the Mc doesn't feel human or is a cardboard cutout.like the reason the tsunade arc hit that much for the Mc was explained a total of 5 times but you just didn't get it did you?
Over_The_Moon69
Over_The_Moon69Author

you'll get why he si that way. and you say there has not been any indication rad his conversation with the Goddess again you'll get the hints and more will be on the way if you continue.

TheAngels:Hello Author, the problem is precisely that, we do not understand how the mc after living so many thousands of years and becoming a god acts like this, not only with Tsunade but with all the other girls, so far you have only shown us a clueless and silly mc and no matter how many times you explain the morality of the mc, this all feels like a plot where you want the mc to have a development, but done very, very badly, plus it's not just me, after Tsunade's arc the criticism started, true?
Over_The_Moon69
Over_The_Moon69Author

also tsunade arc is pretty important for this fic. not from the character Dev of the Mc, but it shows what this system is truly designed for, the Mc had been lucky meeting the women before this, it is basically done this way intentionally. Which is Tsunade arc is the most important one because it opens a lot of things that will help later on.

TheAngels: Your story is good, the mc was bearable so there were good reviews focused on the characters and the story ignoring the mc, you talk about not wanting cardboard mc, but ironically your mc is the only character in your story that feels cardboard, as I said your story is good and the characters besides the mc are good but the mc and the plot of Tsunade was the trigger and you should To know, reviews are made to know what is wrong, not just to put 5*.
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