I guess my expectations were too high, the author overstepped with the MC and the comedy, he originally wanted the exchange to be sexual, later regretting it, also From showing many unnecessary comedy scenes and the personality of the MC is practically panicking, regretting, being dense, submissive and among other negative things, he did not learn anything in the past. More than 1000 years of training, his title of god of war is too big for him At the beginning I was fine believing that I was going to improve and everything but apparently it is not going to change.

Before the Tsunade arc the only bad thing about the fanfic was the mc, after the tsunade arc it's just meaningless drama and the mc got worse from 0 to -100, there are pathetic protagonists and then this one.

Nothing great, just a normal śmût story. But i need to say this: I just realized this mc is the literal definition of a simp. “A man who goes above and beyond pleasing women with the hope of receiving sèxûàl favors in return.” Do with that information what you must

I've reached chapter 70, and it feels like the main character in the story hasn't improved much since the beginning or has possibly regressed. I understand that character development can take time, but when will we see real Growth?

Mc is just pathetic. No scum, no pervert, no worst, no evil... Just pure pathetic. The story itself is quite good and makes you want to ready more but the constant stupidity of mc is being reminded to you nearly every chapter. Especially after the tsunade arc.

japanese mc. Be alone for 8000 years and then become a coward. The character who should go crazy from loneliness is kind to the point of cowardice. If a beautiful woman spits in his face, he says "that wasn't nice". It would have been better to see a MC who went crazy from loneliness and had trust issues because of her previous world. Those who will read it can give it a chance. If you are expecting character development, it seems like it will be extremely slow, let me give you this warning.

great start so much potential but in the end ruined by a pathetic mc and plot progression. There is too much focus on cooking and food. The MC somehow can't make up his mind and is constantly depressed. there is zero character development and useless drama. The story only gets worse and worse. Don't expect it to get better.

I've to say, I nearly had a heart attack after reading the first half 😭 For context: this guy was sending me pics when he was making the arts, I though "Wow, I'd tap." But then I read the first chap and halfway through my heart leaped out. Like, what!? Though, thankfully, the Goddess' pics he showed me weren't of... that one. I'd have done something bad then 🙂 Anywho, read this fic!

mc is so cowardly that it makes the story unbearable. At least we had lemons before now we don't even get lemons, so reading this fiction became more of a chore