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Scarface3699
Scarface3699Lv41yr
2023-06-28 08:29

not offensively bad but it's a pretty barebones story, dialogue is pretty awful/non existent. the biggest dialogue chain has been from the TV show and it's structured poorly. all in all seems like wish fulfillment or self insert stuff that will follow the show pretty closely. There are no characters personalities to speak of too btw. Chapters are short and everything moves at lightning speed. To summarise a waste of time. go author hope u get better but feels like u didnt'teven try to figure out how to write well

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French_Deadpool
French_DeadpoolLv11

chatgpt story I'm sure because it's ultra short, it's good to help authors but that's it, you have to make an effort to lengthen the chapters, it's only help.

Marvel_Fan8502
Marvel_Fan8502Lv4

not really i wanted to test chatgpt but it finished seven chapters in 800 words and the reason i wanted to test was because i remembered a mtl novel that I liked some ideas like the mc being Harry Osborn and his injecting himself with the Oz serum and if i remember he seemed to have something that made him assimilate perfectly and he got one for all after that but the mc had a system that gave him sandom powers from animes but i didtn'tliek that so i just made it have copycat power with a single permanent power and four temporary power and one for all with the previous user and their quirk being erased but he gets their stockpiled strength

French_Deadpool:chatgpt story I'm sure because it's ultra short, it's good to help authors but that's it, you have to make an effort to lengthen the chapters, it's only help.
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