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Benoit_Valtin

Benoit_Valtin

Lv10

I pay author for story creation on old universes, charmed, dexter, highlander, buffy, smallville, stargate where the main hero is a reincarnated Frenchman

2020-04-18 JoinedFrance
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin5h
    Commented

    what you should aim for is the Spider-Man range because it's a mini Hulk, and there is the spider sense

    Ch 61 Chapter 61 Spartan III
    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    creating an inventory ^^

    Ch 2 /2
    The walking dead:Magical-Andrew
    TV · AGSANEX
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Replied to Ghost141simon

    even you couldn't give yourself 5 stars because you know that you write some things without quality

    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Posted

    yes I knew I wasn't going to last long on this story, (c03) the mc has 7 wishes (eight the author is wrong) and two things make me leave the story. 1 the MC is intelligent but risks his life in excess of speed when there is no hurry for him. 2 the mc's wishes are too powerful, from chapter three, we can't imagine the mc having any problems at all... unless we make twd hellish with demons of the gods... because the mc is ultra benefited with these wishes. Personally, the overpowering mc makes me sick to this point, and once again I don't see how an author who has this quality of writing (and who publishes a bunch of images of the mc's weapons, cars, etc.) will be able to render such an exciting story to read.

    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    yes I knew I wasn't going to last long on this story, Androids in walking dead ok great what's the point? there is no difficulty

    Ch 3 training
    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    risking your life in an average state of speed meh, imagine you were wrong because it must be a pool table and not a million illegal money. and I'm not at all a fan of Jarvis in walking dead he already has a lot of cheated stuff there's no need for a virtual straw man. I don't think I'm going to stay on this story for long, it's not starting out wow, even you'll be fed up with it, your guy is so cheated.

    Ch 2 plans
    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    a child would say with all these author photos...

    Ch 2 plans
    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    It's poorly written I feel, I translate and it doesn't come out as usual. moreover you don't know how to count you have 7 wishes and there are 8 things to ask

    Ch 1 reincarnated
    TWD.
    TV · Ghost141simon
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    It's a rather human story, I think, interesting

    Ch 2 The Introduction
    The Boys : A Fate Unwanted
    TV · PyteWriter
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin8h
    Commented

    I'm not too big a fan of giving away the end of the story or at least huge spoilers at the beginning of the story. Personally it never makes me want to continue since something very horrible always happens.

    Ch 1 Photographs & Memories
    The Boys : A Fate Unwanted
    TV · PyteWriter
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin10h
    Posted

    this AI image of an Asian with a big melon is horrible, please take it away ............... ............... ............... ...............

    Essence of a Freak [TWD Meta CYOA]
    TV · daoistgingerale
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin11h
    Commented

    there's Justin Timberlake's "say something" video which I absolutely adore and which was filmed in France, at home. in any case, it was filmed by French people lol anyway, I loved that you talked about this clip and that you made Lucas reproduce this clip.

    Ch 234 MV wrapped up, and marketing
    Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
    Movies · NewComer714
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin12h
    Replied to The_Weeaboo_Lux

    too many questions answered (or rather an unwelcome repetition) and above all the big black point of the chapter, the badges which come to life, impossible for the association to do this without it being all their license

    Ch 8 Trails And Triumph
    Hunter A Hunter
    Anime & Comics · The_Weeaboo_Lux
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin14h
    Commented

    baby chapter, its so short

    Ch 14 Ch - 14 Evolution?
    In DC?
    TV · DemoloRD
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin20h
    Commented

    my mc's name is cool and original

    Ch 2 The Hunt
    Hunter A Hunter
    Anime & Comics · The_Weeaboo_Lux
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin1d
    Commented

    it will be time to start the story, there he is almost only talking with his system :( if we remove all the blabla system we end up with 2 chapter not 9 O_O

    Ch 9 Powers...
    Nano-Machine (DC X ???)
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin1d
    Commented

    the stats are incomprehensible to me, I zap them and read only the new skills

    Ch 9 Powers...
    Nano-Machine (DC X ???)
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin1d
    Commented

    I much prefer this v2 but I wonder which Kryptonian family you will choose for the mc, a zod for more drama, or an inventive family perhaps? I can't wait, MORE CHAPTERS

    Ch 1 Opening: Essence of the Uncommon
    Essence of the Irregular [Smallville CYOA Rewrite]
    TV · daoistgingerale
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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin1d
    Replied to Benoit_Valtin

    and don't feel obliged to make him go out with all the girls that clarck doesn't touch, a seductive MC ok, but he shouldn't think that with his third legs

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  • Benoit_Valtin
    Benoit_Valtin1d
    Commented

    ok for rewriting only if the MC is no longer a bipolar. there is more than enough Chinese mtl for that, no worries for a seducer on the other hand, it feels good. and rather than a brother of Superman, why not just a family friend and they offered to save their young baby too and rather than a brother of Superman. This won't stop the two from living with the Kents, but it will make it less strange for Iol to be intimate with Kara later. Why do the same thing as everyone else when you can easily get around it!

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