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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor1yr
2023-07-25 16:26

Hello readers. This will be my last self-review for this novel as I can only afford to lightly spoil the first volume, the rest you must experience on your own. The first volume has finally ended everyone, it's been a blast to edit and add many things to this version of my story, I believe I've written the best first volume I possibly could. And although this is an 'Extra' novel, it isn't even close to how others with the same name are written, because while I enjoy this type of novel I wanted to write it differently, unlike the others where the weapon selection chapter is always 20 kek. So expect a longer introduction to the world in the first two volumes and only then, when the MC establishes himself as someone proper in the story will the Academy arc truly begin. The text below contains spoilers so only read this if you have doubts about reading this novel. For now, I'll answer a few of the questions I've received so far.

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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

1-Is there magic? Well yes. It isn't 'magic' necessarily but a form of it, which fits the fantasy theme, I've provided a lot of exciting stuff leading to the revelation of it at the end of the volume so for those that immediately dropped it after not seeing those fantasy elements that you wanted, just stick through it and you shall see. And don't expect it to be a simple mana or cultivation rip-off, you can think of it as a simpler version of LOTM's power scaling.

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

2-Tradegy? It's the mc we're talking about, don't expect a masochistic story but don't expect him to have a million cheats. He will be challenged he will be tested, he will be defeated but he will win in the end as all MCs do.

GoldenStache:1-Is there magic? Well yes. It isn't 'magic' necessarily but a form of it, which fits the fantasy theme, I've provided a lot of exciting stuff leading to the revelation of it at the end of the volume so for those that immediately dropped it after not seeing those fantasy elements that you wanted, just stick through it and you shall see. And don't expect it to be a simple mana or cultivation rip-off, you can think of it as a simpler version of LOTM's power scaling.
GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

3-OP? Villain? Will he kill Lyra? Regarding those similar to him in age? Yes much stronger. Against those truly strong on Earth? Not even a challenge. Second. Yes, but it's a build-up, so don't expect him to start as one, he will grow into one throughout the story but he won't kill for nothing, everything the main character will do has a certain motivation behind it. Third. Dumb question read the first chapter again.

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

4-Fl? She has been revealed at the end of the volume and those of you who skip through chapters definitely wouldn't have guessed it. And she is a cutie let me tell you.

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

5- Why reveal the enemy so early? That's what they want the MC to think, I didn't imagine that the readers would've been manipulated as well, I'll take that as a job well done however.

Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

mc ends up with none, 1 or more girls?

GoldenStache:4-Fl? She has been revealed at the end of the volume and those of you who skip through chapters definitely wouldn't have guessed it. And she is a cutie let me tell you.
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

u know that harem is already 2

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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Yes, she is, and I'll be deleting this comment as it's a massive spoiler, sorry about that.

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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Yep yep, and as I said, the plan is for one FL only.

Maedreas:u know that harem is already 2
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv4

single female lead

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FishermanCantSwim
FishermanCantSwimLv5

why do i feel that your sinopsis already explain all the plot from he reincarnated and to powerfull being that looks like the end of the story

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

You think wrongly mate. There are a lot of hints in the synopsis sure, but the plot is way, way, more than just that.

FishermanCantSwim:why do i feel that your sinopsis already explain all the plot from he reincarnated and to powerfull being that looks like the end of the story
Kevin_Harper_1476
Kevin_Harper_1476Lv11

What kind of power does the MC have, does he have a wide variety and if so what kinds of ”magic.” (I know it’s different than traditional magic.) will he use?

GoldenStache:1-Is there magic? Well yes. It isn't 'magic' necessarily but a form of it, which fits the fantasy theme, I've provided a lot of exciting stuff leading to the revelation of it at the end of the volume so for those that immediately dropped it after not seeing those fantasy elements that you wanted, just stick through it and you shall see. And don't expect it to be a simple mana or cultivation rip-off, you can think of it as a simpler version of LOTM's power scaling.
GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Well.... That is a heavy spoiler, so I'll just be a bit vague. . . . . . .  SPOILERS! . . The MC has certain 'Aspects' that form a 'Celestial Essence' that allows him to manipulate 'Aether' both inside and outside his body. He also has many abilities along with that. (They start off simple.) So he will form his own unique 'Specialization' in the future, which consists of manipulation, creation, and body augmentation. A special ability path that was not treaded before. (Typical MC stuff.) Think of Gilgamesh for the creation part (obviously, instead of spawning weapons and the like, he creates them). Of course, there are many limitations, but that's the gist of it.

Kevin_Harper_1476:What kind of power does the MC have, does he have a wide variety and if so what kinds of ”magic.” (I know it’s different than traditional magic.) will he use?
Reborn_Romance0
Reborn_Romance0Lv15

Tragedy*

GoldenStache:2-Tradegy? It's the mc we're talking about, don't expect a masochistic story but don't expect him to have a million cheats. He will be challenged he will be tested, he will be defeated but he will win in the end as all MCs do.
Rionn
RionnLv15

No ntr, whether forced or not right?

GoldenStache:Yep yep, and as I said, the plan is for one FL only.
GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

I had to look this up, but ntr? Seriously? Do you guys have like some sort of trauma?  Also, no, over my dead body.

Rionn:No ntr, whether forced or not right?
Rionn
RionnLv15

In relation to trauma, yes, I do. Getting a random NTR in a series is infuriating. Whether the heroine is giving consent or not, it’s very unpleasant. Thanks for the answer

GoldenStache:I had to look this up, but ntr? Seriously? Do you guys have like some sort of trauma?  Also, no, over my dead body.
Zamir
ZamirLv15

Do you have a discord?

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Nope, I didn't create one 'cause who would it be for? I ain't got readers.

Zamir:Do you have a discord?
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Thefantastictouch
ThefantastictouchLv4

I've been stuck on this book's early chapters for a quite long time already. And i think now is the time for us to part ways. The pros : - The mc's backstory is unknown yet he is likeable and understandable on a certain level. - The world is original. - Some might like the rather slow pace . - The mc's reaction to his reincarnation is really realistic . - A promising plot slowly unravels . - The author 's writing quality is above average( the style is not very eye-catching but it manages to keep you intrigued and there aren't many mistakes ( if any) ). - I don't know the chapters' lenght , but i can tell it must be longer than your average 1000 words on webnovel. The cons : - The characters are bland. The Mc is likeable yet somehow , he is uninteresting enough. If i'm being honest , i simply don't care enough about him , even though i know him( i've read 23 chapters already). I think this comes from two facts : First , the Mc doesn't really have any flaw he should work on( egoism , dishonesty...). Him being insecure makes me empathize with him but that's all. I do not feel really tied to him , nor does he seems realistic , since he has no bad side. And second , the mc's personality is melancholic and cold. Contrary to what people think , writing about a cold mc is really difficult , since it's hard to make him engaging. But not only did the author make him cold , he/she also used an omniscient pov , which further distances readers from the Mc. If only he had funny thoughts despite having a cold demeanor, it would have still been fine. But as i said earlier , he is melancholic. So don't expect rejoicing thoughts from him. On another point , i also don't really like how the Mc acted( in the 23rd chapter ) as though Killing was forced upon him. Emir had a choice. He could have let the hitmen go. So i don't understand why he lamented and acted as if it was forced upon him. If he acts in a certain way , he has to uphold his responsabilities. This all whinning time discredited him highly and it was even the final push for me to definetely stop reading this book. All in all , he is not irritating nor engaging. He is fine and just fine. Now for the side characters... They are forgetable( even the Mc's mother and his sister). - The pace is slow. As i said above , the pace is rather slow. And this together with the characters makes the story feels dragging. - I don't really like the book's general vibe . The book's ambiance is the reflection of the Mc : cold and melancholic. It doesn’t change one bit , and this ends up making the whole reading experience underwhelming. Finally , I pray for your improvement author and hope that my honest review does help you.

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