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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor1yr
2023-05-25 21:00

Giving myself five stars is shameless, but I think I deserve it. I've put a lot of thought into this novel, many future events are already planned with foreshadowing in the current chapters, so look out for them. In this review, I will highlight what you can expect from my novel, although I'm a newbie novelist, I can guarantee you that my novel has excellent writing, and character design. This novel's story is based on a mix of many genres and novels, novels such as Rebuild world, TOPAV, and small elements from Legendary mechanic, and genres such as Sci-Fi ; Fantasy. The world it self is a mix of futuristic and post apocalyptic, so a cyberpunk like world. I'll plan to update atleast once a day, everyday, for a while, only missing days when I'm too busy. As for the many of you who ask if there is going to be a harem or not, let me answer you now. Probably not, it depends on how the story would go tbh, since I'm not set yet on the female characters he will be meeting and how their stories would go. The romance will start later into the story and no it wont be the focus, not in the least, so for now atleast, harem haters don't worry too much, as there is one FL in mind. The story starts of slow, with big revelations about the world at the end of the first volume, I'm republishing my novel, so if you are a reader coming back from my old one, then hello, good to see you again, and for new readers, welcome and I hope you enjoy reading my story.

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Sonu_Siraj
Sonu_SirajLv14

Let me began tradition to ask that every reader ask Is there single fl or harem

Sonu_Siraj
Sonu_SirajLv14

And sorry bud I didn't have stones to give you because it already on your old account

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

And per tradition let me answer you, no. There will only be one romantic partner atleast for the plan I have so far, if the readers wish for one more then I might comply, and that is the maximum, also thanks for coming back.

Sonu_Siraj:Let me began tradition to ask that every reader ask Is there single fl or harem
Sonu_Siraj
Sonu_SirajLv14

Hey broo how many days I have to wait for chapters to reach 100?

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Trust, I want to just mass release, but I have to wait too, so atleast more than a month or so.

Sonu_Siraj:Hey broo how many days I have to wait for chapters to reach 100?
Arrkein
ArrkeinLv11

:) good luck sir! found out about the republishing because I was about to give your old one some stones. haha.

Veller_Cruz
Veller_CruzLv2

then there will be 2 great ones

GoldenStache:And per tradition let me answer you, no. There will only be one romantic partner atleast for the plan I have so far, if the readers wish for one more then I might comply, and that is the maximum, also thanks for coming back.
InfernalMage
InfernalMageLv2

Nah man, I am an author too and am really trying to get those views in but I wrote like 25 chapters in and have around 2.8k views hope I reach this novel's level by writing 50 chapters too[img=recommend]

Sonu_Siraj
Sonu_SirajLv14

bro one one month has passed allready, i want to ask when are you going to mass release the chapters because i want to what happen 100 chapter.

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

I had edited many of the earlier chapters, so it took me longer to pump them out, but we are almost there. I recommended that you re-read it when I eventually reach the end of the first volume.

Sonu_Siraj:bro one one month has passed allready, i want to ask when are you going to mass release the chapters because i want to what happen 100 chapter.
Reborn_Romance0
Reborn_Romance0Lv15

I am happy to know that I am not the only harem hater!

michibadgurl
michibadgurlLv4

I cringed when author said u “deserves” the 5-Star.. bro u rigged the review system yourself . There’s no honesty in these reviews anymore

GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

You are the definition of brain rot

michibadgurl:I cringed when author said u “deserves” the 5-Star.. bro u rigged the review system yourself . There’s no honesty in these reviews anymore
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michibadgurl
michibadgurlLv4

Which part of that is brain rot? Please explain to me “smarty pants”.. who can’t understand the meaning of HONESTY in writing reviews ..

GoldenStache:You are the definition of brain rot
GoldenStache
GoldenStacheAuthor

Hm...

michibadgurl:Which part of that is brain rot? Please explain to me “smarty pants”.. who can’t understand the meaning of HONESTY in writing reviews ..
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