Sir goldenstache I really liked the novel so far but I do recommend you to have some side quests or sub stories that later bunch up and make it big and important like how anvelope did for 'I'll surpass the mc ' or like in 'Jackal amongst snakes' .I also highly recommend for side quests to have more actions like you did for the gang conquest as I consider your forte to in building up and executing a thrilling battle even if its one sided annihilation by the mc.Or have new innovation by mc in the branch of aether and arcana like Inala from I'll surpass the mc or Lucien Evans from throne of magical arcana though I understand that Emir is the battle junkie a niche touch of brillance wouldn't hurt right?! Anyways thank you for the new perspective and keep up the good work and create great novels like cuttle fish that loves diving or En_trailji or ergen or harold , etc authors
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LIKEThanks for the review, it's great that you enjoyed my novel. Btw, I've done those exact things that you mentioned more often later on, especially in the latest volume, so look out for that. As for "innovation" in Aether, though it isn't obvious in the beginning, by the third volume you'll see how he expanded on it, since I finally went into the details of the power system, more or less explaining everything till the peak of the Seraphim rank. There are more innovations I have planned but those will come in vol 4.