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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv11yr
2023-06-19 05:24

The start is decent, but the protagonist has no abilities, his system and strength is never shown or used, his only goal is to develop his village by creating books and gathering talents like pets, that are all flat and useless and serve no purpose. The plot is dumb without a meaningful development, the protagonist is not even part of the plot, a lot of events and details are skipped, there's no training or learning, and anyone could find out about his village secrets since he doesn't bother hiding anything.

Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure

Kaiszer
4.4
341 Chs

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Aun_Aqeel
Aun_AqeelLv4

I mean we kinda do have some idea of his strength since he is able to create the village in the first place gain the respect of everyone in that village and deal with root ninjas quite easily. Also serve no purpose really im not trying to insult u but he is trying to create a village do u honestly think that any village would have survived if they didn't have multiple talented ninjas to help defend and improve the village.

1yr
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Godson_Godson_4730
Godson_Godson_4730Lv4

facts

Aun_Aqeel:I mean we kinda do have some idea of his strength since he is able to create the village in the first place gain the respect of everyone in that village and deal with root ninjas quite easily. Also serve no purpose really im not trying to insult u but he is trying to create a village do u honestly think that any village would have survived if they didn't have multiple talented ninjas to help defend and improve the village.
1yr
3
Author_for_fun
Author_for_funLv4

I think what the original comment is getting at is that the story lacks depth, and the mc is more like a side character than an mc because we don't really get to see any of his development as you would with an mc.

Aun_Aqeel:I mean we kinda do have some idea of his strength since he is able to create the village in the first place gain the respect of everyone in that village and deal with root ninjas quite easily. Also serve no purpose really im not trying to insult u but he is trying to create a village do u honestly think that any village would have survived if they didn't have multiple talented ninjas to help defend and improve the village.
1yr
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Lore_Gaming
Lore_GamingLv4

Having ur village survie doesn’t mean they have strong ninja most jonin are trash in most villages because they don’t have the proper training or skills like justus sword skills extra n they don’t have special bloodlines. So he need to tell us if they have special clans or some Jutsu they are good at or he should steal some form other villages by capturing them n u know

Aun_Aqeel:I mean we kinda do have some idea of his strength since he is able to create the village in the first place gain the respect of everyone in that village and deal with root ninjas quite easily. Also serve no purpose really im not trying to insult u but he is trying to create a village do u honestly think that any village would have survived if they didn't have multiple talented ninjas to help defend and improve the village.
1yr
6
Z_Ril
Z_RilLv14

don't know if you read till the latest chapter or just stop after couple few chapter, but i can tell you that they'll have bloodline clan in their village and mc is kage level.

Lore_Gaming:Having ur village survie doesn’t mean they have strong ninja most jonin are trash in most villages because they don’t have the proper training or skills like justus sword skills extra n they don’t have special bloodlines. So he need to tell us if they have special clans or some Jutsu they are good at or he should steal some form other villages by capturing them n u know
1yr
4
anime_rumahan
anime_rumahanLv1

other people's widows are the goal

5mth
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Kaiszer
KaiszerAuthor

What Can I say, It's My First Novel So obv. I have to give 5 stars to myself for even trying.

2yr

Lustlara_52
Lustlara_52Lv3

I don't even know if there is an MC in this fic anymore. The MC hardly ever appears and the story is just some random fic about different perspectives of the citizens of the grass village. Overall its just a boring read.

1yr
ADHD_Guy74
ADHD_Guy74Lv4

This is a hidden gem, there's only one other kingdombuildin fic about naruto but it's dropped. Besides this is so much better. Good grammar,the mc is likeable. What's there not to like?

1yr
empire1
empire1Lv14

The Story is a cool idea and it is ok so far but I think you need to clarify where you are in the timeline The First Shinobi War happens in the Year 23 The Second Shinobi War happens in the Year 52/3 - 55 Uzushiogakure was Destroyed Between the Years 51 - 54 (not specified) The Third Shinobi War happens in the Years 56 - 64

2yr
Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

it was interesting for 15 chapters or so, then it just becomes ridiculous and boring. most chapters have almost nothing to do with shinobi or the greater story, just weird slice of life subplots. the quality of the writing itself goes downhill too. honestly it feels like the autistic mix between a serious novel and a comedy slice of life. it couldnt just pick one and it just made a mess out of itself.

1yr
WiseHermit
WiseHermitLv4

This FanFic is a special one. I started reading it in between others, as I had nothing else to catch up to anymore and I have to say, I am extremely disappointed and positively surprised at the same time. I have been waiting for this to get more chapters for a long time now, but now after finally reading it (to current Chap 126), I can say that it is quite unique. First things first. The Grammar in this is quite good, albeit starting off problematic. The author improved immensely throughout the story, and especially after the first half. I know this is a dealbreaker for many readers so rest assured. The Story is where things get interesting. I started this FF in hopes of finding something different than the majority of Naruto ficitions which all kind of feel the same. I like medieval settings and I love the aspect of Kingdom building. Seeing a nation thrive, especially in the face of hardships and conflict, is just appealing and interesting to me. The world of Naruto is vast and very diverse one, so I hoped for a good adaptation of these premises, but as i stated before, this is where it gets controversial. The author decided to take a more comedic and "peaceful" approach to these things, which stands in direct conflict with what I expected and hoped for, yet it is done in such an interesting and semi-realistic way, that i found myself immersed in this daring approach nevertheless. I binge read this in 3 days and will continue keeping up with this fros sure. You cant really explain this so I have to just advise others to start reading and to judge for yourselves. But despite a comedic approach, there is indeed a stringent story, and a clear line that perseveres throughout the chapters and arcs. You can see the Village MC is leading, rise to relative power and how other small and bigger players react to it. The world is vivid and in motion, and the many characters we know and love, as well as a multitude of original and new characters, with defined personalities and traits, just add to the whole complete picture. Would i have prefered a more serious approach? Possibly! Am i enjoying this as it is? Definetly! This is a fresh breath of air and in some ways just so bizzare and unexpectedly ridiculous, that it is good again. The circle closes and what remains for the reader is a hilarious but intriguing story unlike any other, I have read before. Take this with a pinch of salt, and just enjoy the messy and chaotic madness, which the leader of the village hidden in the grass creates in the ninja world.

1yr
Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1

So far one of the best naruto novels on the page.....although it is far from being a masterpiece, it manages a good sense of rhythm, the narrative hardly stagnates, the objectives are clear, they are serious when they have to be and funny when possible, the characters have good screen time to develop, the interactions are good and the system is not Almighty... which helps a lot ps: the fact that the novel is not a konoha-fanfic gives it many points ❤️❤️❤️

1yr
IceCoffeLatte
IceCoffeLatteLv10

Sorry I can't give full stars, because there are some things that in my opinion are a bit under-explored such as the MC having a system. But so far the system rarely appears so it looks like it's useless and the MC's power growth is a bit lacking in details such as the amount of chakra or its attributes. That is all and thank you!!

1yr
Evilkingjoker
EvilkingjokerLv5

very good always looking out for updates.

1yr
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