Z_Ril

arceus!

GigaChad6967 is ready for deployment

i think this is his moving speed. not flight speed. like how fast his limb could move, how fast his punch is. reasonable i guess

+1

roku nana

+1

i detected heavy ai usage. the idea is nice. a midfielder for Portugal. but a lot of things are missing. like, what year is he born? never mentioned. the dialogue and narrative is too focused on his growth that it leave nothing for everything else. the youth is maybe pulled way to long. nobody want to sit and read about youth matches. wouldn't hurt to have a big timeskip here and there. overall? not that great. 2/5