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Aun_Aqeel

Aun_Aqeel

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2019-12-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel5d
    Commented

    thats fine as long as its still clear that its the mc harem unlike other fanfics which turns it into the girls harem.

    Q. Yuri in the harem? Like kissing and playing with each other's body while MC fucks them? I don't have promise with or without yuri.
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    I Will Collect All Beauties Of Ninja World
    Anime & Comics · GodOfLust
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Replied to Murod

    Also I think it helps that it's in jack pov not the crews if it was the whole crew pov then I would completely agree with u.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
    Anime & Comics · f0Ri5
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Replied to Murod

    There are changes amongst these chapters it's subtle as multiple times the mc comments on it how people are stronger then in canon or luffy didn't seem to handle it [the kuro fight] these chapters also help develop the mc relationship with some of the characters well at least with zoro luffy and nami also the fanfic is moving extremely quickly into alabasta spending about an arc a chapter overall I think it's fine if u don't like it then fair enough.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Replied to f0Ri5

    Could we get a picture of what the mc looks like.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
    Anime & Comics · f0Ri5
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Replied to Murod

    the author said it will follow canon until alabasta and it seems the mc is strong enough but is wanting to make the journey smooth by sticking to canon for now.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
    Anime & Comics · f0Ri5
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Commented

    I do enjoy the mc well respecting luffy authority deferring to him.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
    Anime & Comics · f0Ri5
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel6d
    Replied to Hot_mature_5km

    The mc is lazy and wants to keep canon until alabasta [which is the arc that the author said canon will change] I really don't think yhe author is trying to make the mc tough.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    Plenty of Fish in the Sea
    Anime & Comics · f0Ri5
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel9d
    Replied to Argent1971

    I'm pretty sure he is still captured.

    This was the last chapter of the Vacation Saga as Hachinosu welcomes its top predators back home.
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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel9d
    Replied to noblej_7BPH
    The worst part of it all is that, based on the folklore behind the Reapers, they would most likely be successful this time too, as they are supposed more advanced than the whole galaxy combined.
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    Time Effect ( A Mass Effect Fanfiction)
    Video Games · Pop0
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel15d
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    Okay can u explain more cause honestly everyone seems to be fine and u were praising the story a while back.

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    Nindō: Dominion
    Anime & Comics · Addyctive7
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel16d
    Replied to Andria_Adel

    But hey it works

    Let's be honest, Luffy can gain 'allies' alongside his adventures like picking apples. Damien does not have that kind of grace.
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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel18d
    Commented

    At this point I can't see thalia not being with the mc she fits with him so we'll a lot better then luke who I'm assuming was the original choice for thalia.

    My God did she look beautiful… I made myself speechless… I was like hold up, wait a minute, something ain't right, she way too beautiful… So yeah, I really don't know what to do with her.
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel24d
    Replied to Shadow_D_Monarch3

    Ye after that rebellion poesidon was turned mortal and forced to make the trojan wall which was why when it was destroyed by the Greek they made a statue of poesidon on it as it was believed he took the Greek side in that war

    "I need your blessing."
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel25d
    Replied to rahul_8553

    The author uploads Monday to Friday but not weekends not sure if there were any changes.

    Ch 55 Master Lila
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel27d
    Commented

    no

    No.
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    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Anime & Comics · ZYREX_01
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel30d
    Replied to Zrielswill

    K thank you

    Ch 6 Ridicule Play
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    Night, Fight, and Light
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel30d
    Commented

    Yo author amazing book but I have to ask there isn't any ntr in this right.

    Ch 6 Ridicule Play
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    Night, Fight, and Light
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel1mth
    Commented

    My advise author don't do that again or u will lose viewers it's the most idiotic thing to do in a story make ur mc a side character in a arc that everyone found well a bit boring.

    Zelretch took a sip and replied. "Well, I didn't say I was going to make him some sort of hero or protagonist. Rather, I was merely curious about the changes he could unleash into this screwy world and whether he could help fix one of the many... singularities within it and many more in the future."
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    Devil's Luck[Arc 5: Worlds Apart]
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel1mth
    Commented

    Agreed

    "Alas, how I do despise tragedies, especially when they befall those whom we hold dear," Tartuffe lamented, his tone somber and unusually serious. "I am thou, and thou art I. Thy pain is mine as well."
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    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
    Video Games · BonVoyage
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  • Aun_Aqeel
    Aun_Aqeel1mth
    Replied to Genkiz

    no he is the God of death not the primordial of death since he is the child of nyx

    "Forget being a God. They're too weak. I want to be more. I want to be something never seen before, something so impossible that when they mention it, only my name would appear. I want to be the first mortal to transcend Godhood and become a Primordial being!" Lucian continued.
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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