What Can I say, It's My First Novel So obv. I have to give 5 stars to myself for even trying.

The start is decent, but the protagonist has no abilities, his system and strength is never shown or used, his only goal is to develop his village by creating books and gathering talents like pets, that are all flat and useless and serve no purpose. The plot is dumb without a meaningful development, the protagonist is not even part of the plot, a lot of events and details are skipped, there's no training or learning, and anyone could find out about his village secrets since he doesn't bother hiding anything.

I don't even know if there is an MC in this fic anymore. The MC hardly ever appears and the story is just some random fic about different perspectives of the citizens of the grass village. Overall its just a boring read.

This is a hidden gem, there's only one other kingdombuildin fic about naruto but it's dropped. Besides this is so much better. Good grammar,the mc is likeable. What's there not to like?

The Story is a cool idea and it is ok so far but I think you need to clarify where you are in the timeline The First Shinobi War happens in the Year 23 The Second Shinobi War happens in the Year 52/3 - 55 Uzushiogakure was Destroyed Between the Years 51 - 54 (not specified) The Third Shinobi War happens in the Years 56 - 64

it was interesting for 15 chapters or so, then it just becomes ridiculous and boring. most chapters have almost nothing to do with shinobi or the greater story, just weird slice of life subplots. the quality of the writing itself goes downhill too. honestly it feels like the autistic mix between a serious novel and a comedy slice of life. it couldnt just pick one and it just made a mess out of itself.

This FanFic is a special one. I started reading it in between others, as I had nothing else to catch up to anymore and I have to say, I am extremely disappointed and positively surprised at the same time. I have been waiting for this to get more chapters for a long time now, but now after finally reading it (to current Chap 126), I can say that it is quite unique. First things first. The Grammar in this is quite good, albeit starting off problematic. The author improved immensely throughout the story, and especially after the first half. I know this is a dealbreaker for many readers so rest assured. The Story is where things get interesting. I started this FF in hopes of finding something different than the majority of Naruto ficitions which all kind of feel the same. I like medieval settings and I love the aspect of Kingdom building. Seeing a nation thrive, especially in the face of hardships and conflict, is just appealing and interesting to me. The world of Naruto is vast and very diverse one, so I hoped for a good adaptation of these premises, but as i stated before, this is where it gets controversial. The author decided to take a more comedic and "peaceful" approach to these things, which stands in direct conflict with what I expected and hoped for, yet it is done in such an interesting and semi-realistic way, that i found myself immersed in this daring approach nevertheless. I binge read this in 3 days and will continue keeping up with this fros sure. You cant really explain this so I have to just advise others to start reading and to judge for yourselves. But despite a comedic approach, there is indeed a stringent story, and a clear line that perseveres throughout the chapters and arcs. You can see the Village MC is leading, rise to relative power and how other small and bigger players react to it. The world is vivid and in motion, and the many characters we know and love, as well as a multitude of original and new characters, with defined personalities and traits, just add to the whole complete picture. Would i have prefered a more serious approach? Possibly! Am i enjoying this as it is? Definetly! This is a fresh breath of air and in some ways just so bizzare and unexpectedly ridiculous, that it is good again. The circle closes and what remains for the reader is a hilarious but intriguing story unlike any other, I have read before. Take this with a pinch of salt, and just enjoy the messy and chaotic madness, which the leader of the village hidden in the grass creates in the ninja world.

So far one of the best naruto novels on the page.....although it is far from being a masterpiece, it manages a good sense of rhythm, the narrative hardly stagnates, the objectives are clear, they are serious when they have to be and funny when possible, the characters have good screen time to develop, the interactions are good and the system is not Almighty... which helps a lot ps: the fact that the novel is not a konoha-fanfic gives it many points ❤️❤️❤️

very good always looking out for updates.