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IceCoffeLatteLv102yr
2023-06-16 22:43

Sorry I can't give full stars, because there are some things that in my opinion are a bit under-explored such as the MC having a system. But so far the system rarely appears so it looks like it's useless and the MC's power growth is a bit lacking in details such as the amount of chakra or its attributes. That is all and thank you!!

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Kaiszer
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Ah, it's okay Actually i would have explained his powers in one go but it's better to be shown in the story I thought Anyway 4 stars doesn't matter

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