Review Detail of ThibeauAsura in Harry potter: The ringmaker

Like some Others, I love the idea of the story. But most of what is written is just a summary like "they had a pleasant chat". I am also not a fan of how many assumptions the MC makes about things he has no concrete evidence about. It was not my cup of tea, but for others, It might be. I hope your fanfiction does great but it wasn't for me.