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uSeer
uSeerLv51yr
2023-05-16 06:47

Confusing and misleading story that's somewhat boring to read. "I only remember my name" he says honestly while looking at an officer wearing a very old uniform. Also some parts if the story feel skipped and summarised.

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TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

It feels summarized because he only does 800 word chapters. Why some chapters he eats food talks for a second and thats end of chapter with nothing happening

mow
mowLv4

How is this the top novel with only 800 words per chapter? tf

TruthHurtsX1000:It feels summarized because he only does 800 word chapters. Why some chapters he eats food talks for a second and thats end of chapter with nothing happening
TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

People fall for author saying they do it for fun when its a gimmick way to get stones and patreon without actual effort. Takes 1 actual chapter and cuts its to bare minimal details then cuts its to 2 or 3 chapters to post

mow:How is this the top novel with only 800 words per chapter? tf
Juliusk
JuliuskLv4

Pretty sure author is just lazy or lacks writing experience. Bro could combine chapters to make a decently long one but nah. 1,600 words is not that hard to write with practice.

mow:How is this the top novel with only 800 words per chapter? tf
mow
mowLv4

If you've ever gone to school and have been asked to do essays, then 1600 words is not hard in the slightest.

Juliusk:Pretty sure author is just lazy or lacks writing experience. Bro could combine chapters to make a decently long one but nah. 1,600 words is not that hard to write with practice.
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