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Subhendu_Gayen
Subhendu_GayenLv31yr
2023-08-02 16:07

I don't know why but I always dropped this author's novel. Maybe MC's are not overpowered, or slow steady story progress, or the MC's slow leveling speed, consistent boring struggle ; that's why I always dropped them after reading 100+ chapters.😞😞

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HideousGrain
HideousGrainAuthor

It's quite funny that you didn't learn that after reading my other novels 😂

Subhendu_Gayen
Subhendu_GayenLv3

Well expectation, hype!!!😀

Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Thank you for the info bro.. I was looking for an OP MC and this novel Title did seem like MC is going to be OP.. All others comment just no give any input about the novel.. After reading a few comments, I did start reading this novel.. Then, after I read up to ch.18 and MC still seem weak, I start lost interest.. So, I looked for a good comment again and saw ur comment input.. It kind of helps me make decisions easier and faster.. I have been wondering when this MC is going to become an OP character but it doesn't seem like it.. Well, this novel kinda similar to the novel called "overlord of blood and iron" excluded an OP MC, of course.. BTW, thanks again.. [img=recommend]

DaoisttwG3qW
DaoisttwG3qWLv1

There is lot of word to exagerate the MC feeling and thought, the more useless word the best... Each time time he kill an ennemy he will be sad(with lot of exageration), he will vomit everywhere, he will always try to take a loose end(authior want us to think the mc is a noble soul but in reality it turn the mc looks more like a moronic soul). He want to keep low so he reveal his prowess and show off like an idiot for instence with the couple, then at the diplom ceremony etc... It takes a chapter for an egg to hatch, a lot of words, useless sentences... the author is filling in to sell more chapters without substance? Every inconsistency in the mc's personality and his strange reactions will always result in a kind of standing ovation, where he will show off again and again. It means the actions are resultoriented, even if the fow of the story is penalized the author has his goal don't care about coherence

Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

He gets op lol but y’all are so dumb you can’t even imagine the journey to get there it’s pathetic

Captain_Spoiler:Thank you for the info bro.. I was looking for an OP MC and this novel Title did seem like MC is going to be OP.. All others comment just no give any input about the novel.. After reading a few comments, I did start reading this novel.. Then, after I read up to ch.18 and MC still seem weak, I start lost interest.. So, I looked for a good comment again and saw ur comment input.. It kind of helps me make decisions easier and faster.. I have been wondering when this MC is going to become an OP character but it doesn't seem like it.. Well, this novel kinda similar to the novel called "overlord of blood and iron" excluded an OP MC, of course.. BTW, thanks again.. [img=recommend]
Kurdi123
Kurdi123Lv11

Braindeath Person :

Chaossin:He gets op lol but y’all are so dumb you can’t even imagine the journey to get there it’s pathetic
BALLSOFVIBRANIUM
BALLSOFVIBRANIUMLv13

after 500 chapters?

Chaossin:He gets op lol but y’all are so dumb you can’t even imagine the journey to get there it’s pathetic
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

“Braindeath person” ☠️

Kurdi123:Braindeath Person :
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

No pretty quickly but you’re always going to run into strong opponents either way his main soultrait is incredibly powerful.

BALLSOFVIBRANIUM:after 500 chapters?
BALLSOFVIBRANIUM
BALLSOFVIBRANIUMLv13

I'm nearing 300

Chaossin:No pretty quickly but you’re always going to run into strong opponents either way his main soultrait is incredibly powerful.
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

cmon don’t tell me your can’t see it, of course he’s not the strongest and can still be beat but let’s be real. He’s pretty op for his level. Anyway good luck bro

BALLSOFVIBRANIUM:I'm nearing 300
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BALLSOFVIBRANIUM
BALLSOFVIBRANIUMLv13

yes, i just completed the latest chapter, hes the strongest in his age group (at the moment) I'm glad I believe you nd gave it a try, its a good novel

Chaossin:cmon don’t tell me your can’t see it, of course he’s not the strongest and can still be beat but let’s be real. He’s pretty op for his level. Anyway good luck bro
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

Yessir 🥹

BALLSOFVIBRANIUM:yes, i just completed the latest chapter, hes the strongest in his age group (at the moment) I'm glad I believe you nd gave it a try, its a good novel
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ACE_KinGz
ACE_KinGzLv14

nope .. not gonna waste a coin in that 200+ Chapter before he gets op

Chaossin:He gets op lol but y’all are so dumb you can’t even imagine the journey to get there it’s pathetic
Beard_slayer
Beard_slayerLv2

yeah but it gets good after 400 chapters

Subhendu_Gayen
Subhendu_GayenLv3

Do you even know what "OP" is? Try Infinite mana in the apocalypse and you'll know.

Chaossin:cmon don’t tell me your can’t see it, of course he’s not the strongest and can still be beat but let’s be real. He’s pretty op for his level. Anyway good luck bro
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

You respond millennia later bro

Subhendu_Gayen:Do you even know what "OP" is? Try Infinite mana in the apocalypse and you'll know.
Hayayh_Basha
Hayayh_BashaLv3

HideousGrain:It's quite funny that you didn't learn that after reading my other novels 😂
ace_spree
ace_spreeLv1

Thats a op mc or victor from my three wives are vampires

Subhendu_Gayen:Do you even know what "OP" is? Try Infinite mana in the apocalypse and you'll know.
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Nehode
NehodeLv2

I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.

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