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Dimensional_Duke
Dimensional_DukeLv131yr
2023-05-18 13:47

Very good book, writting is excellent. This book is very good at kingdom-building. It didn't feel that good at first, it felt like some cultivation world setting at first,but after 15 or so chapters it gets very interesting. I couldn't stop reading. every chapter is consistent. And, there is little info dump- saying that the data is integrated into plot is the no ways incorrect.

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Thiago_Silva_3032
Thiago_Silva_3032Lv2

top

Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

Novel is top teir

Quintessential_Guy
Quintessential_GuyLv13

The beginning or the first few chapters of the book are really important as the are want get people (like me) interested so if it is boring and not captivating then most people wouldn't read far except there's nothing to read. I'm just saying my personal feelings

Dimensional_Duke
Dimensional_DukeLv13

My friend za vibe is cultivation then it's not, za right!

Quintessential_Guy:The beginning or the first few chapters of the book are really important as the are want get people (like me) interested so if it is boring and not captivating then most people wouldn't read far except there's nothing to read. I'm just saying my personal feelings
Daaaaaaaa
DaaaaaaaaLv15

Are they all in the same type of world

Dimensional_Duke
Dimensional_DukeLv13

i think not

Daaaaaaaa:Are they all in the same type of world
Dark_Shadow_4384
Dark_Shadow_4384Lv3

Is this a cultivation novel where they live like 500-800 years?

Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

no bro. I'm not even sure you can call it a world. maybe another dimension

Dark_Shadow_4384:Is this a cultivation novel where they live like 500-800 years?
Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

no. It's a cultivation novel yes but not like any you've seen.

Dark_Shadow_4384:Is this a cultivation novel where they live like 500-800 years?
Dream_Lord14
Dream_Lord14Lv13

well the novel is indeed interesting I have to say, the character development and everything is okay. But I guess you guys should try out the novels; The Journey Of The Origin Lord and Death Courting Immortal.You will find the two novels quite interesting especially Death Courting Immortal

lorca136
lorca136Lv13

is there a system? asking because I only read system novels

Dream_Lord14
Dream_Lord14Lv13

Hi thHi there, just a random new author.If you are looking for a comedian and fun cultivation novel.At the same time packed with quite the action.Then try out this novel.Death courting immortal.

machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Who is the fml?

Claudian
ClaudianLv2

romance?

DimLight
DimLightLv12

hello I'm curious if there will be romance here?

Dimensional_Duke
Dimensional_DukeLv13

not even an infinitely small wisp of it.

DimLight:hello I'm curious if there will be romance here?
Mockin_bird5
Mockin_bird5Lv3

The cute crow got me 😂😂❤️

blalala_zzz
blalala_zzzLv15

3p8

Judah_7283
Judah_7283Lv13

read my new review

Oteng_George
Oteng_GeorgeLv1

I'm like'n this book

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Nehode
NehodeLv2

I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.

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