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2023-07-17 11:17

Hmmmmm. where do I start. First I have read to Chapter 41. Frankly, these chapters were among the most boring chapters in my life, but since it is the author's first novel, let's forgive him. The biggest problem I faced was the stretching of events, the large number of disgusting dialogues, the large stuffing of information, and the writer's attempt to enter the drama and (psychological) element, and these two fields are needed A writer with great experience, and I doubt that he is still in the last chapter he has published. The hero is still 10 years old, and the storytelling method was terrible. It made me sleep. There is no suspense in the events (note this from my point of view.)

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

well. hope u find something better 👋

Mauritany_DL
Mauritany_DLLv4

This is of course because you didn't see the real goal of this novel, to enlighten the masses about how Ditail is the reason for all your problems. (And to make fun of the novel too I guess)

K7RM4
K7RM4Lv13

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Sahil_8379
Sahil_8379Lv3

Yeah the novel is slow and I also thought it is becoming a little boring after MC reincarnates and the young 10 year MC still bothers me but I continued reading it got better to the point that I stopped reading only to wait for more chapters and binge read it so I would suggest to continue, Just saying as I felt the same but started loving this novel after a while. Well, I hope its worth you time. Thank you.[img=recommend]

Desolute_ROSE
Desolute_ROSELv3

Yep totally agree pretty boring with too much disgusting drama

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

for how long is he that young? i don't really like reading Kid MC's novels/arcs.

Sahil_8379:Yeah the novel is slow and I also thought it is becoming a little boring after MC reincarnates and the young 10 year MC still bothers me but I continued reading it got better to the point that I stopped reading only to wait for more chapters and binge read it so I would suggest to continue, Just saying as I felt the same but started loving this novel after a while. Well, I hope its worth you time. Thank you.[img=recommend]
Sahil_8379
Sahil_8379Lv3

Don't worry, the second volume of the book begins with an eight-year time jump, so you will see the grown up protagonist. MC be like :-

PsyLoRD:for how long is he that young? i don't really like reading Kid MC's novels/arcs.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Sahil_8379:Don't worry, the second volume of the book begins with an eight-year time jump, so you will see the grown up protagonist. MC be like :-
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Alejandro_Tapia
Alejandro_TapiaLv2

Well yes, but people got used to reading these types of stories and they say, "Ahh! This is very good!" When in reality it is just another of the masses. Instead of thinking, “There's still a long way to go, I'll be getting better,” the author says, “Okay. I hope you find something better”, as if this were the best, that shows how little self-criticism he has. There are definitely many better stories than this, write to me and I'll send them to you. I give you my recommendations. English is not my native language.

SIN3
SIN3Lv11

Give me what you have

Alejandro_Tapia:Well yes, but people got used to reading these types of stories and they say, "Ahh! This is very good!" When in reality it is just another of the masses. Instead of thinking, “There's still a long way to go, I'll be getting better,” the author says, “Okay. I hope you find something better”, as if this were the best, that shows how little self-criticism he has. There are definitely many better stories than this, write to me and I'll send them to you. I give you my recommendations. English is not my native language.
AbyssmalReader
AbyssmalReaderLv2

Give your recommendations

Alejandro_Tapia:Well yes, but people got used to reading these types of stories and they say, "Ahh! This is very good!" When in reality it is just another of the masses. Instead of thinking, “There's still a long way to go, I'll be getting better,” the author says, “Okay. I hope you find something better”, as if this were the best, that shows how little self-criticism he has. There are definitely many better stories than this, write to me and I'll send them to you. I give you my recommendations. English is not my native language.
Alejandro_Tapia
Alejandro_TapiaLv2

I'm back, sorry. She had left this place. Recommendations. Blind swordsman, you can read it at nobelmtl. Release that witch, novel. The comic is ugly. Silver rank gatekeeper, noblemtl Transmigrated into a tragic romantic fantasy. There is an English version, but I read it from the Korean version. Turns Out I’m a Great Cultivator, Novel. You can read on mtlnovel. Divine Beast Adventures. Let Me Game in Peace. I have forgotten the names of some really good ones, since I changed cell phones, I read from the Chinese or Korean versions.

AbyssmalReader:Give your recommendations
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AshW0If
AshW0IfLv4

(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.

SugarApostle
SugarApostleLv13

Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding😉)... 1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter. 2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue. 3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real. Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day. World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background. My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this. A quote I like very much from this book:- "If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control." As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author🤣🤣. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)

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