DevilDarkness

very very soon

Nashi always gets the best lines.

nah lol 😆😆 well maybe. but come on😂😂

neither. . it's a slow build 'realistic' romance.. it's not always gonna be flowery and happy so no sweet vanilla. neither it'll be twisted or haremy _ so idk what category this goes in lol

give me one example where a character didn't act according to their personality.. as for skills _ idk if u forgot but I've written it way back that in Arcadia people can use all kinds of magic. and only after reaching limit rank that their paths diverge and they all start their own domains and skill growth which becomes signature moves.. and since mc and other main characters around him are still far from reaching those ranks of course that explanation is for later...and if u just simply want me to name what kind of spells mc has or what kind of element he can use or magic balls he can throw - than sorry that'll just be way too many.... fireball is a just a ball of mana wrapped in element of fire, replace it with water, lightning, darkness, light, air, ice -- spell may change, but the principle remain the same... so yeah, I'm not gonna explain every chapter how that works

Actually I do improve. but it's such a complaint which I've answered like a million times already that sometimes I just give up explaining -- the beginning chaps r slow and feel filler like or over dramatic maybe - but they're needed.......As for the part about grammar, I can't help it, I was a newb back then. you'd even see how I struggled with pov shifts back then easily....but I don't know why, but whenever I sit and try to edit the beginning chaps I just can't bring myself to change them... I guess it just grew on me. something about that messy but simple writing just feels so _ real to me.. and then I couldn't help but wonder if I do change everything will I still feel as connected to it as I do now? the answer is obviously no.....and that's why even tho I've edited a lot of chapters and things over the long time -- I've never changed much of my beginning 10 chaps.

top tier providence is nice actually. the concept of his system where he can scan his opponents and fight them in his mind to learn all their tricks and all _ always stuck with me. it's such a good function to have.

u r ..... 🥺🥹...🫂

the beginning 4-5 chaps r kept short on purpose. just to set the theme. (plus i was a newb back then and didn't want to put too many things together)