Hmmmmm. where do I start. First I have read to Chapter 41. Frankly, these chapters were among the most boring chapters in my life, but since it is the author's first novel, let's forgive him. The biggest problem I faced was the stretching of events, the large number of disgusting dialogues, the large stuffing of information, and the writer's attempt to enter the drama and (psychological) element, and these two fields are needed A writer with great experience, and I doubt that he is still in the last chapter he has published. The hero is still 10 years old, and the storytelling method was terrible. It made me sleep. There is no suspense in the events (note this from my point of view.)

I'm giving this novel a five star review cause how the Mc got reincarnated was not too rushed like other mcs that gets sent in the first chapter and me likey new unique troupes . also it have explained the mc's life on Earth very detailed unlike other novels which dosent explain the mc's life on earth like it never existed which makes this novel very different from others plus the the Author of this novel is very friendly and interacts alot with readers(One of the best kind of Authors i say)and always gives answers to any kind of question or doubt no matter how silly or stupid it is(I'm the one who asks stupid silly question the most 😜) the Author explains everything in detail to answer the readers questions(he written three paragraphs to make sure I understood)

(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.

Well first of all the author hired me to give a good review 😏(Nah just kidding 😂 ).So anyway the first few chapters are short but don't judge them as because the author is new and also he improved that too . Important point - read the full story about nobody's life before his transmigration ( Don't do a mistake of skipping the chapters like me 😜 ) MC's charector is likeable too . He will kill anyone to keep his loved one's safe (He has a good Mother and sister too) There is a surprise about his sister too overall all is well .I will say it again that "Nobody will evolve from being anybody to then somebody

starting was great and not bad but thing changes when nightmare occurs the author want to bring the sense of mysteries about the nightmare but failed in it .in every single chapter he bring the nightmare and try to overcome it but just irritating to remember in every single chapter

Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding😉)... 1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter. 2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue. 3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real. Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day. World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background. My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this. A quote I like very much from this book:- "If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control." As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author🤣🤣. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)

Read up to Ch35 and I still did not feel invested whatsoever and found everything boring. The author tries to shove some psychological damage nonsense down your throat for about 10 chapters straight and I just didn't care. You get barely introduced to about 10 different characters and then are supposed to care about something that happened to the MC 20 years ago that just takes away from the main story progression. The story progression so far is him just coming up with random stuff from a 10 year old and everyone falls prey to the classic "just trust me bro". The only sort of knowledge I have about how the world and powers is from a info dump chapter that resembles a college students notes and doesn't flow well at all. Thanks for reading

good story though, but the downside is that u spend a lot of time explaining irrelevant things. i mean i skipped 5 chapters due to reading things that makes no sense. but the story is really good, keep it up

bro u r writing a novel? should have told me i would have been the 1st to read it. .