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AbyssmalReader

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    AbyssmalReader6 months ago
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    Don't make this an idiot plot. This dilemma doesnt exist at all. You wouldn't leave someone innocent suffering, you would save him if he is innocent. Asking first or not doesn't change how much he already suffered, but it assures you that you aren't freeing a criminal

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    AbyssmalReader6 months ago
    Replied to ddaavvee

    You only have 1 review and commented 1 review in all your life, and both of them are for this novel. That's a good multiaccount

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    AbyssmalReader6 months ago
    Replied to RobotBits

    I read until chapter 105 before dropping because it didn't look like it was going to get better. If a story needs you to read 200 chapters to start getting "good" then the novel is simply and plainly bad

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    AbyssmalReader8 months ago
    Posted

    I think the author is deleting the bad reviews. The only ones I could find were from people who gave the book five stars despite leaving negative reviews. The action in this novel is boring and pointless. The main character (MC) fights without knowing how to fight, without knowing his limits, and without knowing if he would even be able to win. The system uses the MC as a proxy, so the MC doesn't have to do anything. Everything is given to him, and the only thing he has to do is complete random quests that the system gives him. The MC is extremely stupid. He doesn't understand the cultivation world, nor does he understand the normal world. He didn't know you could manipulate reviews, and then he said it's because he is "new to the cultivation world." It's like, bro... I don't live in the cultivation world, and this happens here too. This applies to everything. He acts stupidly throughout the novel, then says, "It's because I'm new to the cultivation world." As for the plot, it's boring. They focus little to nothing on the inn. The author tries too hard to be mysterious, adding mystery to everything, even when it makes no sense. The MC is a simp and is always weak, mentally, knowledge-wise, and power-wise. He's always below everyone else, despite having a system that gives him everything he needs.

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    AbyssmalReader9 months ago
    Replied to Marijayne32

    You missed all the points I made. I never said he was supposed to feel no pain. In fact, I said the opposite. With a 300% pain amplifier, he should feel a lot of pain, but he doesn't feel any at all. Did the author forget that he was supposed to feel pain? Slavery is clearly not frowned upon. In the scene with the slave owner, we see that nobody cares at all. Also, why would it be frowned upon if it's not modern Earth? In the given setting, it's pretty normal for slavery to be morally acceptable. Yet, we don't see any other powerhouses having slaves, despite the fact that they are noble people who need slaves. Why wouldn't a slave owner sell their kin? Because it's not correlated. That's what I meant when I said that in this novel, if you're good, you're absolutely good, and if you're bad, you must have the "bad people pack" and do everything bad. Reality doesn't work like that. I never talked about time differences between the realms. I don't know what review of mine you read, but clearly, you didn't understand anything I said. I'm not talking about the princess buying from the MC when I talked about the broken economy, but rather this: "After she was done browsing, Elar bought two rings. 'Can I have those? How much are you asking for?" "Nothing, Your Highness! Consider them yours." Elara didn't argue, but turned toward the guard. He nodded before taking out a large pouch of gold coins and giving them to the merchant. The merchant's eyes widened in shock, and he thanked them continuously. Seeing this, Noah felt somewhat envious of the man. "He made at least twenty gold coins from that pouch. While I've been struggling to make a few in my shop." So, she basically gifted 20 gold coins instead of paying the original silver cost. Later on, we see that the king and the other powerhouses don't even have 1,000 g. Did she spend two percent of her father's wealth without blinking? For random rings? For pretending she was rich? As for the location, it's not just "prime location"; it's plot armor. As I said, a random kid from the street could use the system and get better results than the main character. If you find yourself rereading everything, then you should reread my review, because you missed all my points and distorted everything. I wasn't originally planning on responding because your comment makes no sense, but since I have some free time, I might as well answer

  • AbyssmalReader
    AbyssmalReader9 months ago
    Posted

    Don't waste your money. Ig author automated the uploads and his script got bugged or something, after chapter 80 it's just a repetition of chapters before 80 and chapters of another novel

  • AbyssmalReader
    AbyssmalReader10 months ago
    Replied to AbyssmalReader

    Also, I forgot to mention it, but the author seems to have forgotten the "300% Pain Amplifier." He doesn't feel any pain in any of his fights. A bee sprayed acid all over his arm, and he didn't even complain. Even if you feel average pain, that would have been painful af. Regarding fights and action scenes, most of them are boring and kinda pointless. I think the focus of this novel should be on character development, relationships and the shop, not on fights with bees, slimes and minotaurs. It's not like fighting with slimes would help you in fighting with other people so I don't see the point when you are immortal and you don't need money

  • AbyssmalReader
    AbyssmalReader10 months ago
    Posted

    It's not a bad novel, but I wouldn't say it's good, either. The main character is cowardly and naive at first, but then he starts learning and acting smarter, so that is good because it doesn't last longer than 20 chapters. The first problem I noticed was inconsistencies. In the first chapters, the author has the princess give twenty (or thirty, I don't remember) gold coins to a random vendor on the street, but later, we see that her father, the king, considers one thousand gold coins to be a lot, and that the guild master and other powerful figures in the empire can barely pay five hundred gold coins. I think the author didn't think too hard about the economy at first, and we can see that every chapter. Another problem is the timing. The shop changes places every ten days, so at most, he could have known the princess, the guild masters, and the slaves for ten days. We know for a fact that he knew them for less than ten days (because he didnt met all of them from the very first day and didnt met them every day. The princess, for example, sent her guards to buy stuff instead of doing it herself everyday). But even if he did, how could he have become best friends with the world elite in ten days? They even had an emotional farewell and whatnot even though he had only met them for ten days and their interactions were limited to buying and selling stuff. The cat siblings became obsessed with him after his shop changed places, we can assume that it's because he saved their life but even then it feel pretty exaggerated. The characters lack life. All the good people the MC knows are really good, and when someone is bad, you can instantly tell and everything they do is bad. We are led to believe that the noble who owned the cat siblings is bad because he is a slave owner. Yet, we can't see the king, the princess, the guild master, or anyone else having slaves, even though slavery is legal in the kingdom (because they are good people and if they had slaves they wouldn't be perfect good people) How does that make any sense? Of course, this nobleman has slaves so he is bad, and therefore a traitor who has allied with demons, even though his status and position don't make sense for him to be a demon collaborator. Everything is convenient, and the main character is exactly where he should be. The first time he appeared, he was in the middle of nowhere, but conveniently, the guild master was there to buy from him and give him publicity. She is, of course, a good person and wouldn't rob him, no matter how suspicious he is. He finds a slave who has suffered at the hands of humans, but instead of suspecting him, he conveniently trusts him. This slave has a protective sister who, instead of suspecting him, is conveniently eternally grateful, no matter how weird he acts. Both brother and sister are conveniently geniuses in their respective fields, magic and swordsmanship, and rival the main character, who has a shop full of magic items and a system that gives him knowledge every time he levels up his profession. When ten days pass, and his shop changes places, he conveniently meets only good demons and people, and he is conveniently noticed by an exiled princess who has a beauty that could topple a country (or something like that). This applies to every character in this novel and everything he does. Everything is convenient. Plot armor is hard. He isn't good at anything, and we can assume that anyone with a system would have gotten the same or better results no matter how incompetent he is. Even his character and morality are average. That said, it's a good way to pass the time. You can read it in two afternoons, and it's not good enough to be considered good, but it's not bad enough to drop it

  • AbyssmalReader
    AbyssmalReader10 months ago
    Replied to krishna0512

    You didn't read more than 20 chapters wtf

  • AbyssmalReader
    AbyssmalReadera year ago
    Commented

    This "debate" makes no sense. Why didn't Ren mention that Lily interference almost caused Liam's death, the elven tribes fall, didn't give Liam all the boosts he needed to become more powerful and all that. She intervening would have finished the world if not for Ren fixing everything behind her