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There is a problem I found, which is that we do not know the current time in which the events occur. Can you arrange how much time has passed since one of the events or the actual beginning of the novel?

Do you plan for a long life or immortality for Hardy, since Hardy has somewhat of a superpower, I think of a vampire scenario that I find very appropriate.

The disease of loving attention is truly terrifying

There is a better scenario for you, which is to control the army and military force in the shadows 《like the reality we live in》. It will save you a lot of time.

Please don't make Hardy a golden duck. lol

Hardy should not wait for others to take action against him. Rather, he is the one who takes the first step against others. In the end, he is a “villain.” Also, you do not need to justify that the people killed by the hero are not innocent. In the end, remember that you are writing about a villain, not a hero.

There is a habit I have that may be bad for someone who reads a lot of novels, which is that I hate skipping chapters, so I don’t do that

lollll You insulted their elders

It's a good thing there are no French people here