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ZetswayLv121yr
2023-03-25 02:17

This latest chapter made me realize that what hopes I had for this fic aren't going to come true. The story is funny, that's the only PRO point I can give it. Sometimes, it's the only thing that matters, and it certainly let me read until the last chapter without much suffering. The CON's are many. First, the frustration of reading about already established power systems and seeing them nerfed so much that they may as well not exist. Another major CON is the perfect reenactment of canon. The author likes to use the excuse of the Ancestral Goddess putting fate back on track...but, then, aren't we reading the OG ATG? Until now(chapter 51), not one conflict/action deviated from cannon. Not even a little like the MC getting a bit stronger then the OG Yun Che and not have to deal with idiotic drama in that Palace school. At least it was a bit funny. Last, I would like to ask the author, why do you put comments like "Don't worry he will use X skill soon" or make reasoning that Y skill can't be a skill? If you disliked the cheat, I'm sure you could have made another thing similar but with your own rules on it. Using an already made one makes the reader expectant to see it used at least as good as the original.

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MadusLv5

Yeah, regardless of my hopes for this fic, the goddess controlling mc's fate and forcing canon events to happen no matter what killed my excitement for the story. I mean what's the point of giving mc op system and then make him completly helpless when it comes to having any Control over his fate.

BierbartLv14

The expectations were already kinda negative with low budget version of skills, no level up or something similar, missing extrafunctions if the menü and pretty much again uselesness of the skills in general especially in this cultivation world. Thats really watching somebody who kind of got something better than a "godmode" and seeing him constantly get trashed and abused in a way *shrug*

HellDeimoSLv2

Hmm, by chapter 60, he kind of became much stronger than Yun Che. And small changes in the plot began to appear. For example, Cang Yue will participate in the tournament instead of mc. I'm more disappointed that no one got pregnant, because of the fertility control skill.

MapleHinataSyrupLv1

Eh not gonna lie I don't someone to get preggo this early

HellDeimoS:Hmm, by chapter 60, he kind of became much stronger than Yun Che. And small changes in the plot began to appear. For example, Cang Yue will participate in the tournament instead of mc. I'm more disappointed that no one got pregnant, because of the fertility control skill.
ZetswayLv12

Thx for this, I'll keep reading.

HellDeimoS:Hmm, by chapter 60, he kind of became much stronger than Yun Che. And small changes in the plot began to appear. For example, Cang Yue will participate in the tournament instead of mc. I'm more disappointed that no one got pregnant, because of the fertility control skill.
EREN_JAEGERLv2

What is real name of this fic or are there only 100 + chapter

Zenon00125Lv2

what a lie the work is perfect best work of atg

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