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SenaioLv31yr
2023-03-07 17:40

I have read all chapters that he realised and I am qualified 1st of all writing quality is good. The grammar is good second updating stability I mean dude just released 20+ chapters a day I mean that’s good. Story development is trash it’s follows basically the same plot as the original nothing changed, except the MC who acts like who is somebody who does a to follow the plot, but still follows it. Character design. I mean it’s meh acceptable characters. World background, I mean, we never got a chapter that explains how the world or the cultivation works but but that’s not the biggest issue and we already know it. Well I was hoping for something new, not a recap from the original

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meatball_sanAuthor

It follows plot in the starting chapters because if he doesn't follow plot, dum dum dum!! he is WEAK af. smh.

killersoulLv13

say author what's happening with the god of contract fic?? I enjoyed reading it but there's been no updates

meatball_san:It follows plot in the starting chapters because if he doesn't follow plot, dum dum dum!! he is WEAK af. smh.
95_novel_maniac_95Lv5

in that sense he will always remain weak until he reach the top level so he will follow the plot till the end except for the ending....whats is the point of satou system then....

meatball_san:It follows plot in the starting chapters because if he doesn't follow plot, dum dum dum!! he is WEAK af. smh.
ZetswayLv12

What about the Cheat? I read until the last chapter, comedy is good so it wasn't a chore or whatever to read, but I still don't see his cheat used once. He keeps telling the readers that he has said cheat and how op it is, but then, all conflicts within the world are resolved identically as in canon. When he should obviously have much less less trouble.

meatball_san:It follows plot in the starting chapters because if he doesn't follow plot, dum dum dum!! he is WEAK af. smh.
DetachedDreamerLv14

ouch a story that follows the plot and doesn't change it? thanks for the warning. I'm out.

Enlightened_ClownLv4

I like reviews like they are very helpful. Thanks mate for the warning ⚠️. And with that said, I'm Outta here lol.

SenaioLv3

Well am happy to help and still baffled of how people understand my grammar. Tried reading it again had a hard time

Enlightened_Clown:I like reviews like they are very helpful. Thanks mate for the warning ⚠️. And with that said, I'm Outta here lol.
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Enlightened_ClownLv4

nah dw lol I ate away 'this' from my earlier message, so who am I to call you you out on your grammatical errors

Senaio:Well am happy to help and still baffled of how people understand my grammar. Tried reading it again had a hard time
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