Bierbart

meh fking wimp....

a weak as hell longinus with the functions he currently has.... and a discount magic which is bound to a catalyst and a late start...

considering he has a sacred gear and still needs to use a wand for magic that is discount...

great work so far. but honestly most of the last chapters feel a bit like edgy repetitions and it feels dragged out. just showing how "great" thr mc is supposed to be... even if their points are rather meh in some cases. and the guilt and rage from them feels honestly like comedy relief with the reactions. also feels like they are wonky as heck with their opinions with most of the last behaviour. just as a feedback :)

not like it doesnt exist lore wise in one piece... and everyone somehow knows it and can sense it...

not like most of the world is water... and devil fruit users are weak against it ...

then dont even count on them...

not really... 1 ability? for example laser eyes without the energy source? kinda crap and it is random... anf fixed to affection...

well a wimp... the development of his pokemon is rather lackluster too... meta knowledge... cheats and he has some pokemon for years... and it amounts to just slightly stronger than an ash who had the pokemon for just a few days/weeks.... honestly? dumb plothole to nerf him

why doesnt he max out the potential?... braindead mc gifting perfect pokemon away and ignoring the ones he catches?