Pretty well made story if you are for a main character that doesn’t give care except for the people close to him ,so enjoy reading his journey to get strong enough to take revenge without repercussions.

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First, english is not my first language, and I'm not fluent in it. I am going to make a lot of mistakes in writing. Second, it seems like the author deletes negative reviews because the 5 star ratings and the comments within the chapters don't match; there are hardly any comments, and when there are, they criticize the novel. I might be mistaken about this. Until chapter 21, there's no character development, and we barely know anything about the protagonist, only that he is handsome and distant with people. The secondary characters are dull and didn't evoke any emotion in me. The world feels disconnected, although it starts making some sense as the story progresses. I couldn't continue reading because I only got angrier with the protagonist and the series of unfortunate events that the author initiated just because he dropped his weapons, despite knowing their importance. The author justifies it by saying it was due to the trauma and pain of seeing his family dead, but honestly, I find it stupid.

This novel is much better than I originally thought it would be. It's well written with interesting characters and a good world background. The only complaint I have is that the story sometimes focuses on side characters that don't have anything to do with the Mc and then sometimes kills them, making any form of connection the reader has gotten towards them wasted.

great book, I'm a total derek fan right now!. nice action scene, this book is a hidden gem, I hope the author doesn't drop it halfway. keep it up, this is an amazing book. is the asian girl a major character, I really want to know?!!!.

Gudos author, you've outdone yourself, I'm really entranced with the unique abilities of the teleporters, this is one of the best books I've ever read tbh.

I just read the first chapter of your novel and I have to say, I'm impressed! Your writing has a great flow and you've done a great job of drawing me into the story. I did notice a slight grammar error, but that's just a minor detail that can easily be fixed. Overall, your writing shows a lot of promise and I'm excited to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work!

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WOW😲😲😲, this is soo good. From the plot development right down to the world's background were impeccably right. The author has created a master piece in this novel.