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David_Ate
David_AteLv21yr
2023-03-05 02:48

great book, I'm a total derek fan right now!. nice action scene, this book is a hidden gem, I hope the author doesn't drop it halfway. keep it up, this is an amazing book. is the asian girl a major character, I really want to know?!!!.

Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World

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496 Chs

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Silver_smileAuthor

Shameless author's review.. I've put my heart and mind Into writing this book, I can't claim to have written a perfect book, but I'll say this is an epic novel. You won't regret reading it, thanks

1yr

Grant_Duncan
Grant_DuncanLv15

Pretty well made story if you are for a main character that doesn’t give care except for the people close to him ,so enjoy reading his journey to get strong enough to take revenge without repercussions.

1yr
Pendulum_
Pendulum_Lv12

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Rasec_Cool
Rasec_CoolLv1

First, english is not my first language, and I'm not fluent in it. I am going to make a lot of mistakes in writing. Second, it seems like the author deletes negative reviews because the 5 star ratings and the comments within the chapters don't match; there are hardly any comments, and when there are, they criticize the novel. I might be mistaken about this. Until chapter 21, there's no character development, and we barely know anything about the protagonist, only that he is handsome and distant with people. The secondary characters are dull and didn't evoke any emotion in me. The world feels disconnected, although it starts making some sense as the story progresses. I couldn't continue reading because I only got angrier with the protagonist and the series of unfortunate events that the author initiated just because he dropped his weapons, despite knowing their importance. The author justifies it by saying it was due to the trauma and pain of seeing his family dead, but honestly, I find it stupid.

1yr
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

This novel is much better than I originally thought it would be. It's well written with interesting characters and a good world background. The only complaint I have is that the story sometimes focuses on side characters that don't have anything to do with the Mc and then sometimes kills them, making any form of connection the reader has gotten towards them wasted.

1yr
SGLEWIS
SGLEWISLv1

Gudos author, you've outdone yourself, I'm really entranced with the unique abilities of the teleporters, this is one of the best books I've ever read tbh.

1yr
LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3

I just read the first chapter of your novel and I have to say, I'm impressed! Your writing has a great flow and you've done a great job of drawing me into the story. I did notice a slight grammar error, but that's just a minor detail that can easily be fixed. Overall, your writing shows a lot of promise and I'm excited to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work!

1yr
turtle1234567890
turtle1234567890Lv15

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1yr
Torie_06
Torie_06Lv4

WOW😲😲😲, this is soo good. From the plot development right down to the world's background were impeccably right. The author has created a master piece in this novel.

1yr
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