This novel is much better than I originally thought it would be. It's well written with interesting characters and a good world background. The only complaint I have is that the story sometimes focuses on side characters that don't have anything to do with the Mc and then sometimes kills them, making any form of connection the reader has gotten towards them wasted.
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thanks for the review, I never intended to create Sean but that episode was the introduction of an opposing character. he was the star of that episode, I was introducing his background. It's about Sean right?
Yeah, I felt bad for his sister when he died.
Silver_smile:thanks for the review, I never intended to create Sean but that episode was the introduction of an opposing character. he was the star of that episode, I was introducing his background. It's about Sean right?
I know, also affected me but it's an experience that would speed up his sister's growth. be expecting to see her in future chaps, she may look insignificant at the beginning but she's not. Though she won't appear anytime soon. Thanks for reading.
Lazy_Chicken_God:Yeah, I felt bad for his sister when he died.
