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LazyErosage
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2023-03-04 23:13

I just read the first chapter of your novel and I have to say, I'm impressed! Your writing has a great flow and you've done a great job of drawing me into the story. I did notice a slight grammar error, but that's just a minor detail that can easily be fixed. Overall, your writing shows a lot of promise and I'm excited to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks, I'll try to the best of my abilities to reduce grammar errors. This means a lot to me as a new author.

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