ShadowYuki
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Adrion , i see you are very sick , even after an example you dnt get it or i think you dnt want to get it. Is it because something like this happened in your life??? anyway you do you , it not very hygienic to let someone who refuses to understand a simple thing to make him understand. You have fun with your life and with the definition. Yes for you its not cheating and Yes for us it is that's it, have fun
is it really?? most of the chapters feels like fillers. Just do one thing , read the title and try to skip the chapters and u will know everything in those chapters.
i dnt get how this novel got such high reviews with such inconsistency in the story. Also the story is dragged out waaaay too much. I read uptill entrance examination chapter which is at 170 + chapters. If a reader have to wait for 170 chapter to reach the climax of the story then the story becomes very uninteresting. Most of the chapters feels like fillers , if u just read the title or skip few of the chapters it will not effect much on the storyline. Also the redemption the readers want to see , or the revenge the readers what to see against the Duchess or the heroines are no where in site. Even at chapter 175 i find no revenge against anything. This story feels like extremely slow power up simulator. Also the romance is kind of meh.. For me all this points make this extremely boring. So i dropped it at 175..
Lets say you have a crush and she promises to go on a date with you after you get A grades in your semester but the very next day she slept with her teacher and then blatantly shoves it to your face , then i consider it to be an n.tr, that what exactly happens with the MC of this novel. Drake promises to be with him(MC) after he grows stronger but few chapters later drake slept with MC's teacher Chiron and shoves it in his face. Now the author will argued about this is lots of the comment but u need to understand that Drake is his captain of the ship which the MC cannot avoid or forget even if he wants to. Also if we want that much realism and drama in your novel would we not have read a proper novel instead of a no name author's fanfic??
Lets say , u have a crush and your crush promises to go on a date with you after u get A grades , then the next day she sleeps with her teacher. Is that not a NTR??? that exactly what happens in your fic. Also the above guy can avoid his crush as he might not have much interaction but your MC have to interact as she is the captain. Good luck though if u still think you are right.