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SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv31yr
2023-08-11 03:27

stopped reading bc it was cringe. Humour was also overdone, read if you like rolling your eyes at nonsense scenarios.

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Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

You must have read for the like first 50 chapters probably just 10 in fact first of all it isn't really cringe in any way because a lot of people specifically intelligent people who would have been teleported into the same way or probably done the same thing as he did by that I mean Noah or Lucas Morningstar. it just confuses me how you could not like this I mean I guess a lot of people would like to have something different but what confuses me the most about this review is that first of all it in the book itself isn't even cringe in any sort of way second of all you don't even have anything to prove your facts.

Felipe_Viana
Felipe_VianaLv1

comment above was probably made by an alternate account of the author. The novel is cringe.

Nullity_Marrionete:You must have read for the like first 50 chapters probably just 10 in fact first of all it isn't really cringe in any way because a lot of people specifically intelligent people who would have been teleported into the same way or probably done the same thing as he did by that I mean Noah or Lucas Morningstar. it just confuses me how you could not like this I mean I guess a lot of people would like to have something different but what confuses me the most about this review is that first of all it in the book itself isn't even cringe in any sort of way second of all you don't even have anything to prove your facts.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

yeah again I see that you obviously only read the first 50 chapters because after that it gets way more realistic Battle scenes are better writing is a better soul if you did not read after the first 50 chapters you really cannot make any complaints because after that it's just a full-on better story.

Felipe_Viana:comment above was probably made by an alternate account of the author. The novel is cringe.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

along with that you can't really talk either way since you've only read five books while everyone else who is actually commenting or reviewing books has read way more basically your opinion can be said to not matter at all because of the amount of books you have read The description you might give could be completely wrong which it tendically is after the first 50 chapters.

Felipe_Viana:comment above was probably made by an alternate account of the author. The novel is cringe.
Felipe_Viana
Felipe_VianaLv1

This guy is actually the author.

Nullity_Marrionete:yeah again I see that you obviously only read the first 50 chapters because after that it gets way more realistic Battle scenes are better writing is a better soul if you did not read after the first 50 chapters you really cannot make any complaints because after that it's just a full-on better story.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

evidence?

Felipe_Viana:This guy is actually the author.
SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv3

done the same thing? Like singing when held at gun point? I don't think so.

Nullity_Marrionete:You must have read for the like first 50 chapters probably just 10 in fact first of all it isn't really cringe in any way because a lot of people specifically intelligent people who would have been teleported into the same way or probably done the same thing as he did by that I mean Noah or Lucas Morningstar. it just confuses me how you could not like this I mean I guess a lot of people would like to have something different but what confuses me the most about this review is that first of all it in the book itself isn't even cringe in any sort of way second of all you don't even have anything to prove your facts.
SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv3

50 chapters of nothing is enough to bore a person to death. it is more realistic to have a better paced story minus the humour on author's part rather than expectating readers to be understanding because such thinking will get you nowhere with your arguments.

Nullity_Marrionete:yeah again I see that you obviously only read the first 50 chapters because after that it gets way more realistic Battle scenes are better writing is a better soul if you did not read after the first 50 chapters you really cannot make any complaints because after that it's just a full-on better story.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

50 chapters were bad? everyone has different tastes so really what I could say and what you could say could be completely wrong from what the rest of the world would answer. when you've also read multiple books with the chapters in the thousands already 50 chapters is nothing not even that long.

SamTheOne:50 chapters of nothing is enough to bore a person to death. it is more realistic to have a better paced story minus the humour on author's part rather than expectating readers to be understanding because such thinking will get you nowhere with your arguments.
Maverick_sfx
Maverick_sfxLv13

Its not baseless cause i just wanted to bash my head while reading

Maverick_sfx
Maverick_sfxLv13

After fighting and all starts it's gets bearable

hde
hdeLv1

nah

Nullity_Marrionete:You must have read for the like first 50 chapters probably just 10 in fact first of all it isn't really cringe in any way because a lot of people specifically intelligent people who would have been teleported into the same way or probably done the same thing as he did by that I mean Noah or Lucas Morningstar. it just confuses me how you could not like this I mean I guess a lot of people would like to have something different but what confuses me the most about this review is that first of all it in the book itself isn't even cringe in any sort of way second of all you don't even have anything to prove your facts.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

What do you mean nah?

hde:nah
hde
hdeLv1

I mean that this book is a#s and that you really shouldnt be defending it. Cause the original comment explained it perfectly why its bad.

Nullity_Marrionete:What do you mean nah?
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

hopefully you read my other comment. Read over 50 chaps. I mean bro you must have a terrible rating to call this book bad because it's decent at least. The comment itself said that it had overdone humor and was supposedly cringe even though it has literally none of the elements stated. let's be honest all of the stories I had made before were definitely cringe but I don't see anyone commenting that now do I?

hde:I mean that this book is a#s and that you really shouldnt be defending it. Cause the original comment explained it perfectly why its bad.
hde
hdeLv1

The mc doesn't act like a normal human bro. the writing isnt bad but the mc really isnt fun or interesting ad to that that he doesn't take the world sereosly. also the golden finger was unneeded.

Nullity_Marrionete:hopefully you read my other comment. Read over 50 chaps. I mean bro you must have a terrible rating to call this book bad because it's decent at least. The comment itself said that it had overdone humor and was supposedly cringe even though it has literally none of the elements stated. let's be honest all of the stories I had made before were definitely cringe but I don't see anyone commenting that now do I?
SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv3

remember this comment? Well hde fellow read 10x your amount so I guess his opinion matters more than yours.

Nullity_Marrionete:along with that you can't really talk either way since you've only read five books while everyone else who is actually commenting or reviewing books has read way more basically your opinion can be said to not matter at all because of the amount of books you have read The description you might give could be completely wrong which it tendically is after the first 50 chapters.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

thought you were saying you didn't like the story because of other points. at this point you just making stuff up. I can understand saying the MC doesn't act like a normal person but think about it if anyone had over 180 IQ and had a massive will to survive how would they act? You even said the writing was good but beforehand agreed with the comment which said that the writing was cringe. You're basically stating statements which don't follow your previous ones and it makes no sense at all seeing as this entire conversation has happened in one day.

hde:The mc doesn't act like a normal human bro. the writing isnt bad but the mc really isnt fun or interesting ad to that that he doesn't take the world sereosly. also the golden finger was unneeded.
SamTheOne
SamTheOneLv3

can you explain to me then why mr.180 IQ was not taking it serious at all chapter 1 when held at gun point and goofing around?

Nullity_Marrionete:thought you were saying you didn't like the story because of other points. at this point you just making stuff up. I can understand saying the MC doesn't act like a normal person but think about it if anyone had over 180 IQ and had a massive will to survive how would they act? You even said the writing was good but beforehand agreed with the comment which said that the writing was cringe. You're basically stating statements which don't follow your previous ones and it makes no sense at all seeing as this entire conversation has happened in one day.
Nullity_Marrionete
Nullity_MarrioneteLv14

first off was he necessarily goofing around? second of all if you actually read you should know even without me answering this question he has very much high IQ. third of all to actually answer your question I think anyone in that situation would have been stupefied or at least would have tried to bargain their way out.

SamTheOne:can you explain to me then why mr.180 IQ was not taking it serious at all chapter 1 when held at gun point and goofing around?
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