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UnPaidLandLord
UnPaidLandLordLv22yr
2023-01-01 12:24

How about Lucas x Grace...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]now dont slap me lol

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Night_Crawler619
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UnPaidLandLord
UnPaidLandLordLv2

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]lol I thought the mc looked somewhat like this....

Night_Crawler619:
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

not grace we prefer amelia x lucas

Night_Crawler619:
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Hades_Jades
Hades_JadesLv4

as an ordinary reader i shall watch this ships at war while snacking at my POPCORNS

The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

NO

Deciduous_B0ltling
Deciduous_B0ltlingLv4

Dude, not the annoying ones! I'm alright as long as it ain't Grace or Amelia tbh

The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Same

Deciduous_B0ltling:Dude, not the annoying ones! I'm alright as long as it ain't Grace or Amelia tbh
pingpongs
pingpongsLv4

Don't make Amelia or Grace fl. This is not a good choice Both were almost assaulted by Lucas . It doesn't make sense for either of them to be FL

lroin
lroinLv6

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Hello is there a place I can send you a message to ask for advice on a story i have an idea about and want to write about

Night_Crawler619:
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suryansh_yadav_9375
suryansh_yadav_9375Lv4

lol

Yi_Zaha
Yi_ZahaLv4

thats co[img=recommend]

Kelvar10_
Kelvar10_Lv13

You're bound to be disappointed ☹️

pingpongs:Don't make Amelia or Grace fl. This is not a good choice Both were almost assaulted by Lucas . It doesn't make sense for either of them to be FL
your_real_Dad
your_real_DadLv4

We Love Amelia because of her forgiveness torwards Lucas . She was there for him especially at his worst time tho he shunned her aside .

Kelvar10_:You're bound to be disappointed ☹️
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GreedyHuman
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Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐ World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story. (Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)

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