Nullity_Marrionete

Bro, update your novel

Being honest here I'm pretty disappointed. This book starts off with the main character instantly becoming an edgy MC who is completely fine with death even though they lived in the modern world only a couple of days ago ( legitimately, no one changes that fast ). And also, I'm all for a villain, MCS, but it's quite clear that we're supposed to root for the main character, but for some strange reason, he doesn't help literally billions of people and saved billions of people with a singular action, which would only take a couple of seconds ( like a guide to the world or something ). There's also the fact that this random other guy also changes into an edgy main character after seeing one person die, which makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. There's also the fact that the protagonist instantly has a Mary Sue character on their side in the first 5-10 chapters, and there's also the fact that for some strange reason, they spend alot of time yapping on subjects that could be explained in a couple sentences at most. I'll keep on reading to see if it gets better, but for now, it really doesn't look that good

with how fast he was progressing at the beginning, I'm surprised he doesn't have an iron sword by now

He got hit in the chest and only lost to hearts? ( actually this is minecraft, fine ig)

And now, suddenly, this guy has a change of mentality for some reason (smh). In this case, it makes a lot more sense than the protagonist since he lived in a world where I'd imagine resources were a lot more limited, but even then, no one just has a massive mentality change after one death. That's not how character development works This guy is essentially just saying that he can kill whoever he wants just because he saw one person die, do you know how stupid that logic is?

So he says, he has more information, then all knowledgeable, being yet, he doesn't even know about wandering traders? Plus, he played for 9 years? that's so stupid on so many levels

The real question is how the MC is reacting like he is. He's a guy who comes from the modern era, if anything, he had it far easier than these other guys since he wasn't living underground and had a ton of resources, why the heck is he the one acting all cold and fine, especially since he's, seeing multiple people die in front of him

how are you gonna act all high and mighty when you are essentially killing billions of people

because you could save billions with no repercussions

But he didn't. he posed up an extremely good point