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Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author1yr
2023-03-26 07:24

As we approach our 100th chapter, I'd like to share my review of the story so far. While I acknowledge that it may not be a perfect 5-star rating, I firmly believe that the story I aim to tell is worth the rating I've given it. Admittedly, the progression can be a bit slow, and there are moments when the MC's actions may seem unintelligent or lazy. However, I urge readers to stick with the story until at least the 50th chapter before making any final judgments and dropping hateful comments. If, after giving it a fair chance until 50 chapters, the story still doesn't resonate with you... Then I can always see you in my next story. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to ask in the comments, and I'll do my best to address them. Regarding some common criticisms from a few readers: The MC may appear lazy or unproductive at times, but this is due to the lack of available resources that he can use at the current point in the plot. However, he gradually becomes more proactive as the story unfolds. The MC is not a weak or pathetic (he does act like it in the start but don't be fooled), and I can only ask that you read further to see how his character develops. The pacing of the story may be a bit slow in the beginning, (too much monologues) but it does pick up as the plot progresses.

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YeonMaehwa
YeonMaehwaLv3

How many chapter did you plan on writting? i saw that your previous novel only lasted 150 chapters, i strongly hope this one will last more, even though honestly i dont see how it could end within less than 500 chapters.

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

After this has like 200 chapters, Can you give summary/spoilers of the first 50 chapters? like how his character evolved/what happened etc(like a recap, about 2-3 chapters worth of words). I really have no plans of suffering through 50 chapters of a dumb mc.

EEMMC
EEMMCLv13

nah mc is horrible and unintelligent but suddenly became smart

Card_6819
Card_6819Lv3

So whens the discord server?

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

Even in the first 50 chaps, the mc isn't dumb. All the things he did in the first chaps is to get himself in a favourable situation later on. For instance, he acted scared or cowardly so people can underestimate him. After a while, he did start to reveal his true self. As for recap, maybe I can do that.

BrabbitX:After this has like 200 chapters, Can you give summary/spoilers of the first 50 chapters? like how his character evolved/what happened etc(like a recap, about 2-3 chapters worth of words). I really have no plans of suffering through 50 chapters of a dumb mc.
Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

Definitely more than 500. I think 800 maybe

YeonMaehwa:How many chapter did you plan on writting? i saw that your previous novel only lasted 150 chapters, i strongly hope this one will last more, even though honestly i dont see how it could end within less than 500 chapters.
Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

Ahh, I'm in the middle making one rn

Card_6819:So whens the discord server?
Card_6819
Card_6819Lv3

Perfect timing, let me be the first member!

Night_Crawler619:Ahh, I'm in the middle making one rn
Deciduous_B0ltling
Deciduous_B0ltlingLv4

Is there a crossover between this book and your previous one? Like do I have to read The Villain’s Rising to understand future chapters?

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

No, you can read this without reading my previous work. Although it's loosely connected, I've written this in a way which will pose no problem for the new readers.

Deciduous_B0ltling:Is there a crossover between this book and your previous one? Like do I have to read The Villain’s Rising to understand future chapters?
FieryCheetah
FieryCheetahLv13

Is this harem or not? I'm just asking cuz I don't really like it but I will still read your book

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

No it's not harem. (Just to clarify, there is literally no harem in the book, which means no one will have a harem. Neither the mc nor anyone else.)

FieryCheetah:Is this harem or not? I'm just asking cuz I don't really like it but I will still read your book
Arush_Bajpai
Arush_BajpaiLv4

will kent be his friend i don't mean pawn like a FRIEND and will he help him??

Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

Yes. He already is kind of even tho MC doesn't admit it.

Arush_Bajpai:will kent be his friend i don't mean pawn like a FRIEND and will he help him??
Arush_Bajpai
Arush_BajpaiLv4

r u born with blessings or u gain it , like kent don't have a blessing can he gain it in future ?

Night_Crawler619:Yes. He already is kind of even tho MC doesn't admit it.
Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Author

I think I've explained it before. Some people are born with the blessings. Upon their death, those blessings can be extracted by a blacksmith and turned into relics. For example, Lucas' armor is made from someone's blessing.

Arush_Bajpai:r u born with blessings or u gain it , like kent don't have a blessing can he gain it in future ?
Arush_Bajpai
Arush_BajpaiLv4

well i was wanted to know if kent will get a blessing.

Night_Crawler619:I think I've explained it before. Some people are born with the blessings. Upon their death, those blessings can be extracted by a blacksmith and turned into relics. For example, Lucas' armor is made from someone's blessing.
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Who is the love interest?

Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13

well he wasn't unintelligent before he was an editor and if you read upto 100 chapters you'll see what his past life was that's when you actually get an idea how evil genius he was I guess you haven't read enough yeah I know first 50 chapters he seems dumb at time but give it try now till latest chapter 😔 if you still don't like then I guess it's not for u.

EEMMC:nah mc is horrible and unintelligent but suddenly became smart
Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13

Thank God

Night_Crawler619:No it's not harem. (Just to clarify, there is literally no harem in the book, which means no one will have a harem. Neither the mc nor anyone else.)
Other Reviews
GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐ World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story. (Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)

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