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GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv111yr
2023-05-11 21:12

Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐ World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story. (Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)

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Night_Crawler619
4.5
416 Chs

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lolbingolol
lolbingololLv13

See him as weak? The thing was he was weak that’s why they saw him as weak. The first 50 chapters he did not use his brain? He did not need to use his brain, first of all he was weak ash to do anything and secondly the plot just started and he didn’t need to use his brain because there was no danger.

1yr
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GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

What I meant is that he allowed others to perceive him as a dog, and he didn't utilize his intelligence to make efforts towards self-improvement. Can you guess why he is weak? Well, it's because he is extremely lazy. He neglected to train himself simply because he believed that the plot hadn't started yet, so he saw no need for training or any form of personal development. Surprisingly, even the author didn't take issue with my review.

lolbingolol:See him as weak? The thing was he was weak that’s why they saw him as weak. The first 50 chapters he did not use his brain? He did not need to use his brain, first of all he was weak ash to do anything and secondly the plot just started and he didn’t need to use his brain because there was no danger.
1yr
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ImpishWolf
ImpishWolfLv3

I found this review helpful. I started reading it without looking at any reviews or anything, and I was only at chapter 10 when I felt that I kinda don't like this mc. So, I came to look at the reviews to see if anyone wrote about it or not and decide if I really want to invest in the story. So, thanks for the detailed review mate.

1yr
DaoistkpZiwr
DaoistkpZiwrLv13

well this novel doesn't really shine in the early chapters but if you read at least the last chapter of the authors previous novel(aka:the prequel)this will give the novel some light but if you don't like it you can just leave this on the shelf and come back later when you have no other novels to read

ImpishWolf:I found this review helpful. I started reading it without looking at any reviews or anything, and I was only at chapter 10 when I felt that I kinda don't like this mc. So, I came to look at the reviews to see if anyone wrote about it or not and decide if I really want to invest in the story. So, thanks for the detailed review mate.
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Let this be a warning for all of you, fellow webnovel readers. We all think that we have the freedom to choose which book we want to read. But do we have that? When I first opened this book, I dropped it after the first chapter, thinking it was utter trash. But mind you, that was a grave mistake because I ended up garnering the author's wrath. And on the next day, I woke up to a note, telling me, "I got ur family and I live inside your walls. If you ever want to see them again, continue reading it." And so here I am, locked in the basement while praying that I can see them soon again. Don't get me wrong, I definitely enjoy reading this book especially when the author live streams how my family is starving in the room next door.

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Night_Crawler619
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As we approach our 100th chapter, I'd like to share my review of the story so far. While I acknowledge that it may not be a perfect 5-star rating, I firmly believe that the story I aim to tell is worth the rating I've given it. Admittedly, the progression can be a bit slow, and there are moments when the MC's actions may seem unintelligent or lazy. However, I urge readers to stick with the story until at least the 50th chapter before making any final judgments and dropping hateful comments. If, after giving it a fair chance until 50 chapters, the story still doesn't resonate with you... Then I can always see you in my next story. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to ask in the comments, and I'll do my best to address them. Regarding some common criticisms from a few readers: The MC may appear lazy or unproductive at times, but this is due to the lack of available resources that he can use at the current point in the plot. However, he gradually becomes more proactive as the story unfolds. The MC is not a weak or pathetic (he does act like it in the start but don't be fooled), and I can only ask that you read further to see how his character develops. The pacing of the story may be a bit slow in the beginning, (too much monologues) but it does pick up as the plot progresses.

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Haremphobicmike
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An amazing that you just can’t get enough of! the ability to have the Mc have a high intelligence and comedic personality without being to overpowered, while maintaining a good plot to the story and having diverse set of characters is an amazing act of itself. Highly recommend

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UnPaidLandLord
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How about Lucas x Grace...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]now dont slap me lol

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OverloadHunter
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My Favourite author has released his next novel. And this novel starting is amazing I am waiting for more chapters. FACT - MUST READ THIS AUTHOR NOVELS. I love this novel and you are also gonna love it.

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Player23
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--- Hi [Night_Crawler619], I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to let you know how much we've missed your updates. Your stories have been such a joy to read, and the time without them feels a little emptier. Your writing means a lot to us, and we truly hope you'll return when you're ready. Take care, and know that we’ll be here waiting eagerly for your next work! (Please come back) (Please come back) (Come back...) (What would Lucas do?) What is a story? Who is our Author Why do we fight? Can you answer them... Author?

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GoddessKarma
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I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You're wondering why you're still reading this 8. You saw that mistake.... Right? (on 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said saw you, not you saw 13. I also skipped 1 14. You got tricked 15. I'm wasting your time... NOW GO AND READ THE STORY! You're missing out!

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SUSHANT
SUSHANTLv4

I am starting the story now and with all my anti-harem bones, I hope and pray with both my hands and feet close that it's not going to be a harem. Author if it turns out to be a harem, I will kill you!!

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sweet_bananas
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I'm up to chapter 30 right now. The novel is generic, as if any other person were to reincarnate as a novel-type scenario. But the writing quality is irritating, and I don't mean the grammar; rather, the manner the author writes the story is irksome; I can't count how many times the protagonist breaches the fourth wall, which makes me cringe at times, and there are simply too many info dumps.

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