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UnPaidLandLordLv22yr
2022-12-27 10:32

The writing quality is mindblowing, the character development is so reasonable and smooth, its almost shocking... And the presentation is truly magnificent..never read any Author's work that presented the story in such a godly way before... TBH can I know your age esteemed author kun and how did you develop such quality in writing ?

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Night_Crawler619Author

Lololol It's not as good as you claim but thank you (unless it's sarcasm 🤣💀). I'm 19 btw

UnPaidLandLordLv2

It is... and its not even a sarcasm.. How tf is your writing so good🤨🤨

Night_Crawler619:Lololol It's not as good as you claim but thank you (unless it's sarcasm 🤣💀). I'm 19 btw
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UnPaidLandLordLv2

BTW, when will you make a discord server for he novel😃😃😃??

Night_Crawler619:Lololol It's not as good as you claim but thank you (unless it's sarcasm 🤣💀). I'm 19 btw
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RheizzLv14

hey author, is this novel will be harem or not?

Night_Crawler619:Lololol It's not as good as you claim but thank you (unless it's sarcasm 🤣💀). I'm 19 btw
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Night_Crawler619Author

No harem

Rheizz:hey author, is this novel will be harem or not?
PerfectMistLv14

Truly Wonderful

Ink_Weaver122Lv13

Bro how about checking this novel and giving a review --> Extra pages: The author Odyssey.

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GreedyHumanLv11

Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐ World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story. (Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)

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