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SuryaputraKarna
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2023-06-22 19:00

Could not read after ch. 35, MC turned into a watcher and is just cocky for no reason even after almost getting killed, The way Wednesday is introduced is very stupid, he just goes to her is like hello i know ur father kill someone and here is the proof and the she falls in love with him 1 chapter later

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Karate_master_b
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Bro... I really dont think you read what was happening in the chapters properly, There is no need to hate for no reason, She has a valid reason she doesn't fall in love with him after "One Chapter" but rather feels a stronger attraction to him after he almost dies saving her. Also hs has a reason to be cocky, He is a young kid with a 16 year old mentality and all of a sudden he has the Abilities and Smarts like Tony stark.

Karate_master_b
Karate_master_bAuthor

The reason he straight up went to her like that is for the sole purpose of Disrupting the plot completely and that was the quickest way, He didn't care about her at the start why should he, But thanks to charecter development they both experience things together and get closer. I recommend you read the stories before commenting some stupid Nonsense like this on other peoples reviews, Bringing down there rating on a Book they worked hard upon. Other than that have a Good day.

Karate_master_b:Bro... I really dont think you read what was happening in the chapters properly, There is no need to hate for no reason, She has a valid reason she doesn't fall in love with him after "One Chapter" but rather feels a stronger attraction to him after he almost dies saving her. Also hs has a reason to be cocky, He is a young kid with a 16 year old mentality and all of a sudden he has the Abilities and Smarts like Tony stark.
SuryaputraKarna
SuryaputraKarnaLv4

I am not hating anyone, just this novel aint my cup of tea

Karate_master_b:Bro... I really dont think you read what was happening in the chapters properly, There is no need to hate for no reason, She has a valid reason she doesn't fall in love with him after "One Chapter" but rather feels a stronger attraction to him after he almost dies saving her. Also hs has a reason to be cocky, He is a young kid with a 16 year old mentality and all of a sudden he has the Abilities and Smarts like Tony stark.
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