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CafeconLeche
CafeconLecheLv51yr
2023-03-21 03:12

the story is going nowhere and it's getting a bit boring, worse with slow updates and few words in each chapter. I would have liked him to act more like Tony Stark, of course you don't have to make him a playboy but he stole a lot of money so he could start a company and start inventing technologies, he's not even prepared enough to deal with problems, he seems like your typical mc Chinese who, instead of preparing for trouble, rushes headlong into it.

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Personnaly it seems to me that the readers here have been to diluted to a stupid Mc not preparing for any problem and using plot armour and my Mc who could not possibly be aware of such danger and coming up against it all of a sudden and it's not like he suddenly gets a burst of power to defeat his opponent or some mor powerful person save him, he in the end uses his own stuff to Survive the dangers

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