Fito

The story starts well, with a lot of action and exploration and good character development, it would have been better if it didn't deviate so much from the universe of the series and started to explore many magical things, also each chapter is extended in too many explanations of each change of the system.

The story was already complicated with the whole magic thing and now with this it's not even clear where it's going.

The story has an interesting beginning but it seems familiar, is it a translation?

It seems like a good story with a plot about creating video games and having some romance, but the whole Chinese approach seems like it's an MTL but the author doesn't clarify it, otherwise you can give it a chance.

An interesting story, the only bad thing is some disturbing moments, the MC is not very intelligent either.

The story moves quickly and it seems like it lacks a beginning, there is too much information in the chapters and it is difficult to follow the story, the MC's motivation is still not well understood.

The story may seem boring at first since it progresses very slowly and is only training and the sad life of the protagonist while he is a child, only later when he is older is when the story begins to progress, it is also not said if the protagonist has magical powers or is it just training.

I don't know why but I feel like I've already read this story, maybe I've read a Theon story with a parrot before.

I think I missed where the plot is going.

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