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2024-11-05 00:50

Actually pretty enjoyable. The only thing I dislike are the character relationships. Cain is too much of a pushover for his “teammates”. The way he doesn’t finish off anyone who betrays/defies him puts me off. Anyways I’ll keep reading and see if there is some character development.

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

Thanks for the review. The point of Cain not finishing off any one that goes against what he says, is he stupid. Since this is a post-apocalyptic setting he thinks of every still living human as a resource. If he goes off on a killing spree, there will be less of this valuable resource. Although there are exceptions Cain logically doesn't prefer killing people just because they disagree with him. If you have any more questions feel free to ask

Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv13

Wait what He doesn’t kill off people who betray him cause they are human Bro wha That sucks

Demons_and_I:Thanks for the review. The point of Cain not finishing off any one that goes against what he says, is he stupid. Since this is a post-apocalyptic setting he thinks of every still living human as a resource. If he goes off on a killing spree, there will be less of this valuable resource. Although there are exceptions Cain logically doesn't prefer killing people just because they disagree with him. If you have any more questions feel free to ask
Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

He does. It's just that there isn't a lot of betray going on in this book. I prefer to steer away from such drama. And if there are conflicts that lead to betrayals and such, they are well fleshed out and often not what they seem. To answer you, Cain isn't someone that kills for no reason. But he does, although he thinks it is a waste of valuable human resources in a world where it will be scarce in the coming years.

Cursed_sin:Wait what He doesn’t kill off people who betray him cause they are human Bro wha That sucks
Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv13

Ok bet I’ll give it a shot

Demons_and_I:He does. It's just that there isn't a lot of betray going on in this book. I prefer to steer away from such drama. And if there are conflicts that lead to betrayals and such, they are well fleshed out and often not what they seem. To answer you, Cain isn't someone that kills for no reason. But he does, although he thinks it is a waste of valuable human resources in a world where it will be scarce in the coming years.
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So firstly I just wanna state that this is actually a good novel, could even be great. I have issues with a few things though. 1stly too much exposition, way too much exposition. This novel could actually benefit from breaking up and expanding the first few chapters to flush out more intricate details and better character development and such. I feel as though the Author loves this novel and has a great many ideas he wants to implement and it shows by coming off as if he's rushing the development of the story. There's a distinct difference between withholding information and slowly trickling it in after hooking the reader with great action beats and giving information dumps to get critical information out of the way. There are some grammar errors as well as spelling flaws, but by far the biggest issue is the exposition. Sometimes it even rips the reader out of immersion of the story. We gain information that could easily be told to us in more creative ways. Overall the author is creative and even though this is a systems novel, I feel they do a great job of utilizing it as a tool rather than the main focus. The main focus is the world, and there's thought put into this world, which is why the exposition drives me up a wall because you are taking away from truly expanding the beauty of the world. I know this may seem like a rant or bashing but I'm only being tough because you gotta gem here, slow down and polish that baby. If you establish that beginning right all that juicy tid bits i know your rushing to get to will pay off even more.

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