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Demons_and_I
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2023-01-02 01:45

I'mma give myself 5 stars for the effort. Now, for the good part. I've begun editing this book from the beginning. I've edited about 9 chapters, ironed out typos and grammatical errors to make the book more enjoyable. If you have been reading this book for a while I sincerely apologize for this inconvenience, as the new story has more than a few differences with the old version. Read to find out 馃榿. I am trying my best to iron out all the details. So please, bear with me. I promise not to disappoint you. Thank you 馃

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EonX
EonXLv11

So Author, MC was thinking about killing any or everyone who he thinks will come in his way in future, so what is the difference between Tian( killed his own son to retain his power and throne) and MC when coming to gain Power, they are willing to kill anyone without much consideration like if he did anything bad to him or not , I want to ask you is MC going to be like this to end of the novel or change his personality regarding life of others and about gaining power and also about developing genuine relationship with opposite gender and other people ?

Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

I think this is a wonderful question. To answer your question, yes. Cain does in fact come to realize the value of human life alongside his own, much to the point where he becomes even hesitant to take lives. However, I did try my best to strike a delicate balance between the two. He is no hero, but rather a rationalist.

EonX:So Author, MC was thinking about killing any or everyone who he thinks will come in his way in future, so what is the difference between Tian( killed his own son to retain his power and throne) and MC when coming to gain Power, they are willing to kill anyone without much consideration like if he did anything bad to him or not , I want to ask you is MC going to be like this to end of the novel or change his personality regarding life of others and about gaining power and also about developing genuine relationship with opposite gender and other people ?
Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

As for Tian, you can think of him as evil. Very evil. In the story, of evil were to be represented with an image, it would be his. He's just as evil as the Devils, maybe a bit worse. P.S: All the female MC's, Cain will develop an emotional connection with.

EonX:So Author, MC was thinking about killing any or everyone who he thinks will come in his way in future, so what is the difference between Tian( killed his own son to retain his power and throne) and MC when coming to gain Power, they are willing to kill anyone without much consideration like if he did anything bad to him or not , I want to ask you is MC going to be like this to end of the novel or change his personality regarding life of others and about gaining power and also about developing genuine relationship with opposite gender and other people ?
EonX
EonXLv11

when is Evangeline going to change from a cunning character( who sees others as mere pawan in her hands, she even sees Cain as same , a pawn who is valuable for her Future goals nothing more and didn't even use her actual powers to save sasun when susan life was in very grave danger and when Cain wanted to attack lucas for trying to kill susan, Evangeline stopped him and even said that was just some unimportant stuff like susan life was meaningless to her and trying to make Cain like her and sometimes she talks like Cain has to bend to her will and walk in the direction her choice it was like manipulating everything around her to her liking to achieve her goals) to a someone who cares for other around her and become genuine with cian and other female MC's and about her past??

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McWms99
McWms99Lv2

So firstly I just wanna state that this is actually a good novel, could even be great. I have issues with a few things though. 1stly too much exposition, way too much exposition. This novel could actually benefit from breaking up and expanding the first few chapters to flush out more intricate details and better character development and such. I feel as though the Author loves this novel and has a great many ideas he wants to implement and it shows by coming off as if he's rushing the development of the story. There's a distinct difference between withholding information and slowly trickling it in after hooking the reader with great action beats and giving information dumps to get critical information out of the way. There are some grammar errors as well as spelling flaws, but by far the biggest issue is the exposition. Sometimes it even rips the reader out of immersion of the story. We gain information that could easily be told to us in more creative ways. Overall the author is creative and even though this is a systems novel, I feel they do a great job of utilizing it as a tool rather than the main focus. The main focus is the world, and there's thought put into this world, which is why the exposition drives me up a wall because you are taking away from truly expanding the beauty of the world. I know this may seem like a rant or bashing but I'm only being tough because you gotta gem here, slow down and polish that baby. If you establish that beginning right all that juicy tid bits i know your rushing to get to will pay off even more.

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