Cursed_sin

“Cassarae’s enormous sword…” Pause

Ehh I feel like she’s gone through enough politicking to know the basics That too she’s read the Prince so I feel it might not be at the level of “hard”

Peak chapter I appreciated the censorship I’m not here to read smut Also the chapter was kinda short

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What that?

Bro…art of war was made for spoiled noble brats It would in fact not go hard here

Translator bro You are cool Just needed to say this Thanks man for the quality

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That’s even worse No human is static I could one day love you like a brother and a week later stuff happens and now I’m praying on your downfall

I get you And I respect you for being rational in the face of my slightly aggressive review But I stand by the review in that I think upending the whole definition of a warlock like that doesn’t sit right with me. Warlocks are generally viewed as cunning reckless and ambitious mages willing to go to the extremes for power. By dealing with being behind their comprehension they gain power while sacrificing something crucial in return. Your mc calls himself one without any of he key character traits shown in the first 6 chapters I read For your argument to hold any weight it would’ve required more exposition in which we understood the main characters previous world better. In all honesty, a man who sees no need to be even conceal information about himself when thrown into a a confusing situation is just downright stupid. Hoping you succeed with your novel and grow from it Have fun author